Comment from AnnaLinda

Excellent

Poet,

I think you did a really great job of using those 6 words in this lovely seasonal poem with plenty of wonderful imagery and nice rhymes
and alliteration. Nothing forced about this poem.

Did you know you have it listed as "Fantasy Non-Fiction?"

I really like this entry and wish you best of luck in the contest.

Anna

 Comment Written 06-Mar-2021

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reply by the author on 05-Apr-2021

Thank you so much!

Comment from lancellot

Excellent

This is a very well crafted seasonal poem and I like how, as in real life, it cycles around again. Not sure how this being listed as prose and not poetry will effect you. I would ask Tom to change it to poetry, just to be safe.

Notes

Popcorn and movies by the {fires warn }glow

- fire's warm

 Comment Written 04-Mar-2021

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reply by the author on 05-Apr-2021

Thank you so much!

Comment from PoemsOfDD

Excellent

This is a good entry for the Use These Words contest. You have managed to fit all words required into a rhyme of changing seasons and what each season brings. The description effective through the variable rhythm.
A tiny edit, if I may, as shown in ( ).
Popcorn and movies by the fire(')s warn glow
Good luck in the contest. ~DD

 Comment Written 04-Mar-2021

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reply by the author on 05-Apr-2021

Thank you so much!