I Am The Perfect Cat's Meow
Every cat I have owned has always strutted her stuff.24 total reviews
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
This poem speaks your pet cat is proud of her dress, feats, acts and looks but she tells man understands her for she thinks herself the perfect cat's meow; well said, well done; thanks for sharing this.
reply by the author on 02-Mar-2021
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This poem speaks your pet cat is proud of her dress, feats, acts and looks but she tells man understands her for she thinks herself the perfect cat's meow; well said, well done; thanks for sharing this.
Comment Written 02-Mar-2021
reply by the author on 02-Mar-2021
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Thank you so much for reviewing.
Comment from Judy Lawless
Love the picture and the poem! I think it describes most house cats to a tee. I wonder how they became so independent, yet very dependent on the comforts of home that they are provided. Still we love them.
reply by the author on 02-Mar-2021
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Love the picture and the poem! I think it describes most house cats to a tee. I wonder how they became so independent, yet very dependent on the comforts of home that they are provided. Still we love them.
Comment Written 02-Mar-2021
reply by the author on 02-Mar-2021
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Thank you so much for reviewing. Cats are cats.
Comment from Susan Newell
This is a very enjoyable piece, and quite representative of haughty cats (which happens to be all cats). It was a pleasure to read. You eid very well with a quatrain that doesn't seem forced.
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reply by the author on 02-Mar-2021
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This is a very enjoyable piece, and quite representative of haughty cats (which happens to be all cats). It was a pleasure to read. You eid very well with a quatrain that doesn't seem forced.
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Comment Written 02-Mar-2021
reply by the author on 02-Mar-2021
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Thank you so much for reviewing.
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You are welcome.
Comment from robyn corum
Annie,
This was a fun post - and aren't you a seriously smart writer to catch two birds with one poem! hahahaha
I haven't tried many of these quaterns because - I admit it -- I'm a bit skeered of these intricate poetry forms. *smile* It's easy to see that your way of doing things seems to have helped you a lot - and I'll have to put your secret technique in my pocket to remember for another day. Clever!
The only thing is that several of your lines do not have the correct number of syllables - supposed to be eight, correct?
I made some notes for you:
1.) What I want means get it right now
--> nine syllables
2.) Always give milk to me warm
--> 7
3.) I love to strut before the mirror
--> 9
4.) With gold and jewels, there is no error
--> 10
And though I should probably deduct a star, I got in trouble this morning for doing so in an instance when I really should NOT have. So I'm really, really feeling STUPID and generous. That works in your favor today. hahaha Please edit? And then have a marvelous week!
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reply by the author on 02-Mar-2021
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Annie,
This was a fun post - and aren't you a seriously smart writer to catch two birds with one poem! hahahaha
I haven't tried many of these quaterns because - I admit it -- I'm a bit skeered of these intricate poetry forms. *smile* It's easy to see that your way of doing things seems to have helped you a lot - and I'll have to put your secret technique in my pocket to remember for another day. Clever!
The only thing is that several of your lines do not have the correct number of syllables - supposed to be eight, correct?
I made some notes for you:
1.) What I want means get it right now
--> nine syllables
2.) Always give milk to me warm
--> 7
3.) I love to strut before the mirror
--> 9
4.) With gold and jewels, there is no error
--> 10
And though I should probably deduct a star, I got in trouble this morning for doing so in an instance when I really should NOT have. So I'm really, really feeling STUPID and generous. That works in your favor today. hahaha Please edit? And then have a marvelous week!
This rating does not count towards story rating or author rank.
The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 02-Mar-2021
reply by the author on 02-Mar-2021
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You can always be honest with me and give whatever you feel is appropriate. I appreciate your input and I have gone back and made the corrections. I was in too much of a hurry with this one as there was a lot of family stuff going on at the time and I should have held it longer. Thank you so much for your honesty.
