Silken Web
A Rondel for the contest7 total reviews
Comment from Wendy G
Nature is amazing, and the more we find out about the various qualities of each part, the more we should be humbled. Your poem expresses this beautifully - and I do love the image! Best wishes for the contest.
reply by the author on 03-Mar-2021
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Nature is amazing, and the more we find out about the various qualities of each part, the more we should be humbled. Your poem expresses this beautifully - and I do love the image! Best wishes for the contest.
Comment Written 03-Mar-2021
reply by the author on 03-Mar-2021
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Thank you for sharing your insights on this piece! I appreciate the positive feedback!
Comment from Miss Cookie Atkinson
I like the artwork you choose to go with your poem, they are a perfect match.
You captured my attention from the first word to the last.
This is an interesting poem to read. This is what I call a food for thought poem.
Thank you for sharing.
Cookie
reply by the author on 03-Mar-2021
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I like the artwork you choose to go with your poem, they are a perfect match.
You captured my attention from the first word to the last.
This is an interesting poem to read. This is what I call a food for thought poem.
Thank you for sharing.
Cookie
Comment Written 03-Mar-2021
reply by the author on 03-Mar-2021
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Thank you for sharing your insights on this piece! I appreciate the positive feedback!
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It was my pleasure, take care
Cookie
Comment from Pam (respa)
-Very nice image
and presentation.
-I appreciate the notes, too.
-A well written poem with
very good repeating lines.
-Effective imagery and rhyme.
-I also like the message that
"the web of life is fragile, yet strong."
-But we need to work to keep it that way.
-Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 03-Mar-2021
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-Very nice image
and presentation.
-I appreciate the notes, too.
-A well written poem with
very good repeating lines.
-Effective imagery and rhyme.
-I also like the message that
"the web of life is fragile, yet strong."
-But we need to work to keep it that way.
-Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 03-Mar-2021
reply by the author on 03-Mar-2021
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Thank you for sharing your insights on this piece! I appreciate the positive feedback!
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You are quite welcome.
Comment from kiwigirl2821
A good Rondel poem. Your format is correct and follows a story encouraging the reader to go a little deeper for your intent. I read this a couple of times and each time, the content seemed to be just a bit different each time I read it. Good luck. xoxo Kiwi
reply by the author on 03-Mar-2021
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A good Rondel poem. Your format is correct and follows a story encouraging the reader to go a little deeper for your intent. I read this a couple of times and each time, the content seemed to be just a bit different each time I read it. Good luck. xoxo Kiwi
Comment Written 03-Mar-2021
reply by the author on 03-Mar-2021
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Thank you for sharing your insights on this piece! I appreciate the positive feedback!
Comment from zanya
It's an interesting title for the Rondel, drawing the reader in to read on and explore the reality of the 'web of life' and how 'fragile' it is yet 'strong' at the same time
reply by the author on 03-Mar-2021
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It's an interesting title for the Rondel, drawing the reader in to read on and explore the reality of the 'web of life' and how 'fragile' it is yet 'strong' at the same time
Comment Written 03-Mar-2021
reply by the author on 03-Mar-2021
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Thank you for sharing your insights on this piece! I appreciate the positive feedback!
Comment from amada
Oh yes, dear annonymus poet...I have admired, just look at the spirit's net and I have admired their trade, and the secret of those intrinsic lines of life. I admire your words and your sentiments.
reply by the author on 03-Mar-2021
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Oh yes, dear annonymus poet...I have admired, just look at the spirit's net and I have admired their trade, and the secret of those intrinsic lines of life. I admire your words and your sentiments.
Comment Written 03-Mar-2021
reply by the author on 03-Mar-2021
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Thank you for sharing your insights on this piece! I appreciate the positive feedback!
Comment from Iza Deleanu
The picture is amazing and the last stanza leaves space for hope and repentance: "
If warming of temps is allowed to prolong,
the holes in the web won't mend or heal.
Perhaps if we show some respect and kneel,
we will not be hearing our planet's swan song.
The web of life is fragile, yet strong" Thank you for sharing and good luck with your writings.
reply by the author on 03-Mar-2021
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The picture is amazing and the last stanza leaves space for hope and repentance: "
If warming of temps is allowed to prolong,
the holes in the web won't mend or heal.
Perhaps if we show some respect and kneel,
we will not be hearing our planet's swan song.
The web of life is fragile, yet strong" Thank you for sharing and good luck with your writings.
Comment Written 03-Mar-2021
reply by the author on 03-Mar-2021
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Thank you for sharing your insights on this piece!
