Comment from Mark D. R.

Excellent

This verse includes lots of good ink! Your cartoon image is a nice companion to the same. Do like your complementary contrast with poet and artist.

Minor editorial:

While I like the words you wrote, I suggest a punctuation and capitalization change as follows:

Artist with brush
gracefully strokes canvas.
( a return between each complete thought?)
Poet with pen artistically
mingles words on paper.

IMHO this sets off each concept in a distinctive way.

Mark

 Comment Written 28-Feb-2021

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reply by the author on 28-Feb-2021

I agree and I first had it exactly the way you suggest, than I looked at Naani verses and each line began with a capital letter. I guess my first inclination was correct. Thanks for read and review.

Comment from Jannypan (Jan)

Excellent

I enjoyed your contest entry, Mystery Author. Good job on the style of naani. Your image is perfect to pair here. I like the comparison of artist/poet. In the end, though, both are creating images of enjoyment. Best wishes.
Respectfully, Jan

 Comment Written 28-Feb-2021

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reply by the author on 28-Feb-2021

Thank you for taking the time to read and provide feedback. Appreciated.

Comment from Sugarray77

Excellent

Hello Mystery Writer. Well done on this well- written verse. I enjoy reading verses that are meaningful and this one is just lovely. Well done and good luck in the contest.

Melissa

 Comment Written 28-Feb-2021

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reply by the author on 28-Feb-2021

Thank you for taking the time to read and provide feedback. Appreciated.