Love Consumes Me Rondeau
my love rondeau2 total reviews
Comment from Pantygynt
This departs from the the conventional rondeau in the manner in which the repeat is handled.
The repeat at the end of the second stanza is only part of the the first line so here it might simply be 'Your love' or perhaps 'Your love consumes'. You have chosen to repeat the whole of the last line of the first stanza. So this is a heavily modified rondeau and may result in disqualification on the grounds of non-compliance.
reply by the author on 01-Mar-2021
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This departs from the the conventional rondeau in the manner in which the repeat is handled.
The repeat at the end of the second stanza is only part of the the first line so here it might simply be 'Your love' or perhaps 'Your love consumes'. You have chosen to repeat the whole of the last line of the first stanza. So this is a heavily modified rondeau and may result in disqualification on the grounds of non-compliance.
Comment Written 28-Feb-2021
reply by the author on 01-Mar-2021
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hmm will revise thanks for the suggestion, Your Love consumes is good
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
I enjoyed the sentiment here but I am not sure you have the correct format for the contest, I would check the syllable count and also this should be in iambic meter, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 01-Mar-2021
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I enjoyed the sentiment here but I am not sure you have the correct format for the contest, I would check the syllable count and also this should be in iambic meter, love Dolly x
Comment Written 28-Feb-2021
reply by the author on 01-Mar-2021
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thanks I will revise it accordingly
