Where Are All The Children
Viewing comments for Chapter 26 "Alex's Fate"A vigilante takes down trafficing rings.
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Comment from Carol Hillebrenner
The story is moving on nicely and Alejandro's death is devastating. Wondering what you will do next. The doctor at this place seems a little too well equipped for the preemie, but I can believe he got the visas as he has worked with the slaves apparently for quite a while. Good luck with this.
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reply by the author on 28-Feb-2021
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The story is moving on nicely and Alejandro's death is devastating. Wondering what you will do next. The doctor at this place seems a little too well equipped for the preemie, but I can believe he got the visas as he has worked with the slaves apparently for quite a while. Good luck with this.
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Comment Written 28-Feb-2021
reply by the author on 28-Feb-2021
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Thank you so much for reading my chapter and for such a kind review. I'm so glad you enjoyed it. The doctor worked at a hospital in Guatemala, he knows how to improvise, use what he has on hand.
Thank you again for all your help, support, encouragement, and friendship. It always means so much to me, take care.
Comment from Sugarray77
Misty, you are a very good dramatic writer. I always get immersed in your stories from the very beginning. Well done on keeping up the tension, dramatic scenes, and leaving us hanging... again. :). So well done.
Melissa
reply by the author on 28-Feb-2021
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Misty, you are a very good dramatic writer. I always get immersed in your stories from the very beginning. Well done on keeping up the tension, dramatic scenes, and leaving us hanging... again. :). So well done.
Melissa
Comment Written 28-Feb-2021
reply by the author on 28-Feb-2021
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My Thank you so much for your kind review and your marvelous stars. I'm so glad you enjoyed it. If I didn't end with a cliffhanger, you'd think something was wrong, lol.
Thank you again for all your help, support, encouragement, and friendship. it always means the world to me, take care.
Comment from Liz O'Neill
Whoa, that was well written. To pull off all that suspense before the reader has time to even absorb the tragedy. We experience what Anna experiences. Wait, things are happening too quickly. It all seems too simple, knowing you we're not finished here.
reply by the author on 28-Feb-2021
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Whoa, that was well written. To pull off all that suspense before the reader has time to even absorb the tragedy. We experience what Anna experiences. Wait, things are happening too quickly. It all seems too simple, knowing you we're not finished here.
Comment Written 28-Feb-2021
reply by the author on 28-Feb-2021
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Thank you so much for such an encouraging review. I'm so glad you enjoyed it. You're right, the story isn't quite finished, Anna has a promise to keep.
Thank you again for all your help, support, encouragement, and friendship. It always means the world to me, take care.
Comment from royowen
Alejandro gave his life for the two loves of his life, which is the definition of true agape love "greater love hath no man than to lay down life for a friend."John 15:13. So, somehow the doc has got a passport for Miha, and the eldest son will go with her on the escape. Well done, great episode, blessings Roy
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Alejandro gave his life for the two loves of his life, which is the definition of true agape love "greater love hath no man than to lay down life for a friend."John 15:13. So, somehow the doc has got a passport for Miha, and the eldest son will go with her on the escape. Well done, great episode, blessings Roy
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Comment Written 28-Feb-2021
reply by the author on 28-Feb-2021
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Thank you so much for such a warm review. I'm so glad you enjoyed the chapter. Thanks to Alejandro, many will be free to pursue a happier, unrestrained life.
Thank you again for all your help, support, encouragement and friendship. It always means the world to me, take care.
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Well done
Comment from Ulla
Awe, Misty, what a tragic outcome. It was just the last thing I anticipated. That Alejandro should die is a disaster. But at least Alex is still safe. Yeas the only thing is to get away and as far as possible. And now Alejandro's brother is to come with her for protection. Now what.
It's very well written, Misty. Ulla:)))
reply by the author on 28-Feb-2021
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Awe, Misty, what a tragic outcome. It was just the last thing I anticipated. That Alejandro should die is a disaster. But at least Alex is still safe. Yeas the only thing is to get away and as far as possible. And now Alejandro's brother is to come with her for protection. Now what.
It's very well written, Misty. Ulla:)))
Comment Written 28-Feb-2021
reply by the author on 28-Feb-2021
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Thank you so much for reading my chapter and for such a warm, encouraging review. Alejandro is a great man, sacrificing his life for the safety of his wife and son. At least now they're finally free. Anna doesn't forget the promise she made.
Thank you again for all your help, support, encouragement and friendship. It always means the world to me, take care.
