Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose

Excellent

Blushing Beauty
by June Sargent

Hello, June,

Thank you for adding a chapter to our renga two books. It's a lovely couplet. I love the fan topic. Spaniards, like Asians, love fans. Nice alliteration. Well done.

 Comment Written 27-Feb-2021

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reply by the author on 27-Feb-2021

Glad you liked this addition to the book!

Comment from Irish Rain

Exceptional

This is just so pretty.
'fan of floating petals'...
I just love that.
Hiding one beauty with another,
a clever trick!
This was quite enjoyable!!
Blessings...

 Comment Written 26-Feb-2021

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reply by the author on 26-Feb-2021

Thank you for sharing your insights on this piece! I appreciate the positive feedback and most generous rating!

reply by Irish Rain on 26-Feb-2021

I think it's just so wonderful!

Comment from Mark D. R.

Excellent

June,

You nicely adorned your Renga with alliterations. Your selected illustration (a geisha?) and color scheme reinforce your tight verse.

Blushing beauty and floating petals are most expressive phrases - very nice presentation for this collaboration.

Mark

 Comment Written 26-Feb-2021

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reply by the author on 26-Feb-2021

Thanks! I tried to submit a logical and relevant follow up to the previous one on cherry blossoms.

reply by Mark D. R. on 26-Feb-2021

You ably accomplished that task!

Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear

Excellent

This 7/7 couplet poem Renga to follow the book, Renga Two, speaks how her the blushing beauty hides her smile and make her more beautiful personality; well said, well done; thanks for sharing this. ALCREATOR

 Comment Written 25-Feb-2021

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reply by the author on 26-Feb-2021

Thank you!

Comment from lyenochka

Excellent

Nicely done 7-7 for Gypsy's Renga book! I'm so glad you're contributing consistently. I always end up having too many other topics to be writing about. Thanks for keeping the book going.

 Comment Written 25-Feb-2021

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reply by the author on 26-Feb-2021

Thank you for your supportive feedback. Always happy to hear from you. I do hope this Renga book continues.