Comment from Patty Palmer

Excellent

A colorful entry, What a beautiful horizon in this picture. Makes me think that the Lord is looking down watching us and keeping us safe, Now if we could get Him to do something about our government, all would be right with the world, Good luck with the contest~
Patty

 Comment Written 27-Feb-2021

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reply by the author on 27-Feb-2021

Thanks for your review. Unfortunately I don't think even God can fix the governments of today.

Comment from Anne Johnston

Excellent

Sunrise, a very good subject t choose for this poem, and you have found many great words to describe it, starting with the same letter. Good rhyming and good picture to illustrate.

 Comment Written 25-Feb-2021

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reply by the author on 26-Feb-2021

Thanks for your review. I always find sunrises amazing.

reply by Anne Johnston on 26-Feb-2021

You are welcome

Comment from Pam (respa)

Excellent

-Good artwork and
presentation.
-A good topic.
-The beginning of
each line is very good,
along with the rhyme
and imagery in the poem.
-The mood is joyful as
the sun rises and people
"rise and shine" with the "morning light."
-Well done; good luck.

 Comment Written 25-Feb-2021

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reply by the author on 26-Feb-2021

Thanks for your review. Glad you enjoyed.

reply by Pam (respa) on 26-Feb-2021

You are welcome.

Comment from papa55mike

Excellent

My favorite pictures to take are sunrises and children. What a wonderfully written poem. I wish I had a six for you.

Good luck in the contest!
Have a great day, and God bless.
mike

 Comment Written 25-Feb-2021

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reply by the author on 26-Feb-2021

Thanks for your review. I'll accept your virtual six.

Comment from PENofFIRE

Excellent

Beautifully written. You painted a awesome picture of a sunrise. Your rhyming was perfect. You chose your well to describe a sunrise. I loved this. Best wishes in the contest.

 Comment Written 25-Feb-2021

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reply by the author on 26-Feb-2021

Thanks for your review. Glad you enjoyed.

Comment from Susan Newell

Excellent

This is a very nice description of what for the sun is "All in a day's work." Nice figurative language -- seeds of a new day. This should do well in the contest. Good luck.

 Comment Written 25-Feb-2021

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reply by the author on 26-Feb-2021

Thanks very much for your review.

reply by Susan Newell on 26-Feb-2021

You are welcome.

Comment from Crystal A Castaneda

Good

The picture says a thousand words for me with this poem. Its a nice example of a good day in my eyes anyway. This is really a awesome picture with beautiful color.

 Comment Written 25-Feb-2021

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reply by the author on 25-Feb-2021

Glad you liked the picture, however that is not what needs reviewing