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8 total reviews
Comment from barbara.wilkey
I enjoy reading your one person skit. You are extremely creative and it really shows in these skits. Thank you for sharing them with us. I need thirteen more words, but really have nothing else to say.
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I enjoy reading your one person skit. You are extremely creative and it really shows in these skits. Thank you for sharing them with us. I need thirteen more words, but really have nothing else to say.
Comment Written 27-Feb-2021
Comment from moonsunrise
I like the title you chose for your book. This chapter "Dispute 16" does not depict a very happy person happy to play the role of Ms.Liberty does it? Someone must at times do something they do not want to do if they are to survive. The other alternative is to starve. This was very cleverly written. Please let me know if I am on Target or if I missed something. Kind regards!
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I like the title you chose for your book. This chapter "Dispute 16" does not depict a very happy person happy to play the role of Ms.Liberty does it? Someone must at times do something they do not want to do if they are to survive. The other alternative is to starve. This was very cleverly written. Please let me know if I am on Target or if I missed something. Kind regards!
Comment Written 25-Feb-2021
Comment from estory
These two alter egos banter like a volley at a tennis match. Each giving as good as he gets. I like the line about Miss Liberty as a scarecrow in drapes. Underneath the surface it really speaks of our own misgivings and uncertainty when taking chances and risks. estory
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These two alter egos banter like a volley at a tennis match. Each giving as good as he gets. I like the line about Miss Liberty as a scarecrow in drapes. Underneath the surface it really speaks of our own misgivings and uncertainty when taking chances and risks. estory
Comment Written 25-Feb-2021
Comment from Mastery
And I am most likely alone in a room, by myself too, Iza, because I just do not understand the meaning of any of this piece. I will give it five stars though in case it is just my ignorance. Bless you. Bob
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And I am most likely alone in a room, by myself too, Iza, because I just do not understand the meaning of any of this piece. I will give it five stars though in case it is just my ignorance. Bless you. Bob
Comment Written 25-Feb-2021
Comment from royowen
Well these two are at it again, and this time are in the theatre, and evil me is at it again, tormenting the living daylights out of miss Me. Well done Iza, great script, blessings Roy
Typo : Miss Loberty('s) performance.
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Well these two are at it again, and this time are in the theatre, and evil me is at it again, tormenting the living daylights out of miss Me. Well done Iza, great script, blessings Roy
Typo : Miss Loberty('s) performance.
Comment Written 25-Feb-2021
Comment from country ranch writer
Don't you know by now that e vil lurks around ever corner of the stage waiting an$ watching hoping one to frail in the roll he plays.keep a sharp eye out for mr evil.
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Don't you know by now that e vil lurks around ever corner of the stage waiting an$ watching hoping one to frail in the roll he plays.keep a sharp eye out for mr evil.
Comment Written 25-Feb-2021
Comment from lyenochka
Poor ME will be teased tomorrow for his role as Ms. Liberty. Hope the money paid was worth the humiliation! Glad one of them is making some money!
Suggestions:
otherwise he hear from me. (he'll or he will)
here comes nothing. (goes) instead of "comes"
it worse the money. (it is worth the money)
I know is embarrassing, (it's)
Finally is over. (it's) You really need a subject in English, so "it is over" not "is over."
reply by the author on 25-Feb-2021
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Poor ME will be teased tomorrow for his role as Ms. Liberty. Hope the money paid was worth the humiliation! Glad one of them is making some money!
Suggestions:
otherwise he hear from me. (he'll or he will)
here comes nothing. (goes) instead of "comes"
it worse the money. (it is worth the money)
I know is embarrassing, (it's)
Finally is over. (it's) You really need a subject in English, so "it is over" not "is over."
Comment Written 25-Feb-2021
reply by the author on 25-Feb-2021
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Thank you so much for the grammar corrections and for your wonderful review.
Comment from Elizabeth Emerald
These two are priceless!
He better be good, otherwise HE'LL hear from me.
I hope IT'S WORTH the money.
I know IT is embarrassing,
money doesn't grow ON trees.
Finally IT is over.
reply by the author on 25-Feb-2021
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These two are priceless!
He better be good, otherwise HE'LL hear from me.
I hope IT'S WORTH the money.
I know IT is embarrassing,
money doesn't grow ON trees.
Finally IT is over.
Comment Written 25-Feb-2021
reply by the author on 25-Feb-2021
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Hi Liz, how are you feeling?
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I'm fine!
