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heartbeats synchronized

5-7-5 (mother and baby)

6 total reviews 
Comment from robyn corum
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Mark,

Oh, man! I am so sorry I missed this one when it was first released. I mean, not that it matters as long as I got to see it, right?? Congratulations!! It is so clear why this one took the prize!!

Btw, I AM following you, right? Gotta double check that. Thanks!

 Comment Written 02-Mar-2021


reply by the author on 02-Mar-2021
    Thanks Robyn!

    Climbing onto the podium steps is most gratifying, but getting personal feedback for my posts is equally important.

    I guess for this post, our beats were in sync with FS voters.

    Mark
Comment from Goodadvicechan
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This is a poem of love. I like the picture. It shows the bondage between mother and child.

Mother love is unconditional. People should take care of their mothers when they grow up.

Thanks for sharing.

 Comment Written 28-Feb-2021


reply by the author on 28-Feb-2021
    Mother?s love is unconditional, especially in my verse and its accompanying photo. But I have wonderful memories of ?testing? in a similar fashion with my children and grandchildren (-:
Comment from tempeste
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Ciao poet! You have 4 votes now!

For many children present il fulcro of life , their life.

New life is precious ..caring for it is a 24/7 job...

... but i can imagine , off spring also gives the most immense joys in life.

 Comment Written 27-Feb-2021


reply by the author on 28-Feb-2021
    Thanks in advance for your fourth vote in the contest. It is a wonderful moment shared with mother and child.
reply by tempeste on 01-Mar-2021
    Congratulation!

    you won the red ribbon and all on your own !

    It was a very touching poem !
Comment from Jean Lutz1
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My six star of the day went fast. Can't imagine anything better than this. Picture and words tugged my heartstrings. If only every child could be birthed to an environment such as this. I wish you well in the contest.

 Comment Written 25-Feb-2021


reply by the author on 25-Feb-2021
    Jean,

    I have had a similar feeling as a father and grandfather - falling asleep with a baby in my arms is just wonderful. It is more likely they have just had their bottle or been nursed by their mother. (-:
Comment from Anne Johnston
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"mother and baby ~
their heartbeats pulse together
in quiet moments"
Very appropriate words you have used to express what is seen in this picture. How precious to hold a baby so close to your heart.

 Comment Written 24-Feb-2021


reply by the author on 24-Feb-2021
    As a father, I remember the joy of holding my children and grandchildren in a similar way - snoozing with them, close to my heart!
reply by Anne Johnston on 24-Feb-2021
    Yes, it is the same for fathers as it is for mothers.
Comment from lancellot
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A very nice poem. I do think that little guy's heart may pulsate a lot faster than mom's but the idea is sweet. I heard that babies like to sleep on their mother's chest so they could hear the heartbeat again, as they became so used to it while chilling inside.

Good entry.

 Comment Written 24-Feb-2021


reply by the author on 24-Feb-2021
    Not being a medical person, I am unaware of the heartbeat count for the infant shown in the photo. Before it is born, I do know it is much higher.

    Thanks for your review and stars for my contest entry.