Ballet Girl
Minute Poetry27 total reviews
Comment from Jimmy Hogg
Great, such a lovely image of the chubby little toes going up en pointe- I mean your words, not the picture, although that's cute too.
Thanks for sharing
reply by the author on 23-Feb-2021
Great, such a lovely image of the chubby little toes going up en pointe- I mean your words, not the picture, although that's cute too.
Thanks for sharing
Comment Written 23-Feb-2021
reply by the author on 23-Feb-2021
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Hello Jimmy. Thanks so much for your lovely comments. I am delighted you liked this verse. :)
Melissa
Comment from Susan Newell
What a nice poem to accompany the image. It is easy to imagine that little girl dancing and twirling and jumping into adulthood to end up on stage a s a solo ballerina.
reply by the author on 23-Feb-2021
What a nice poem to accompany the image. It is easy to imagine that little girl dancing and twirling and jumping into adulthood to end up on stage a s a solo ballerina.
Comment Written 23-Feb-2021
reply by the author on 23-Feb-2021
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Hello Susan. Thanks so much for your lovely comments. I am delighted you liked this verse. :)
Melissa
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You are welcome.
Comment from Cindy Decker 2
I saw her or someone like her who is very overweight, and she is a professional ballet dancer. Nice tribute to a girl who beats the odds.
Good luck in the contest,
Cindy
reply by the author on 23-Feb-2021
I saw her or someone like her who is very overweight, and she is a professional ballet dancer. Nice tribute to a girl who beats the odds.
Good luck in the contest,
Cindy
Comment Written 23-Feb-2021
reply by the author on 23-Feb-2021
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Hello Cindy. Thanks so much for your lovely comments. I am delighted you liked this verse. :)
Melissa
Comment from country ranch writer
Ballet takes a lot of practice and concentration. I tried it but I would rather ride my horse than attend classes. To rough on the toes or me I don't do pain very well.
reply by the author on 23-Feb-2021
Ballet takes a lot of practice and concentration. I tried it but I would rather ride my horse than attend classes. To rough on the toes or me I don't do pain very well.
Comment Written 23-Feb-2021
reply by the author on 23-Feb-2021
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Hi there Barbara. I did not know you like horses. Glad to learn something new about you. Thanks so much for the review... I did not take ballet either... I enjoyed softball. :)
Melissa
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If you go back d read some of my old works you will find out I was quite involved at
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Smiles to you B
M
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😱I miss those days
Comment from royowen
What a delightful poem Melissa, those pudgy toes, with legs to match perfectly. It reminds me of the calisthenics competitions (an Australian invention, somewhere between gymnastics, exercises, March,and dance) my girls at three, were involved as "babies" and were a lot like your artwork, well done, great post, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 23-Feb-2021
What a delightful poem Melissa, those pudgy toes, with legs to match perfectly. It reminds me of the calisthenics competitions (an Australian invention, somewhere between gymnastics, exercises, March,and dance) my girls at three, were involved as "babies" and were a lot like your artwork, well done, great post, blessings Roy
Comment Written 23-Feb-2021
reply by the author on 23-Feb-2021
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Thank you Roy. I just loved seeing those baby toes and thought it would match well. I only had boys so never got to see the dance classes or performances. Hope we have granddaughters some day. :)
Melissa
Comment from LisaMay
What an adorable photo! You've captured the child's instinctive feel for movement - her inner ballerina. She is a delight to all who see her chubby little legs and toes mimicking more skilled artistry. Your poem itself is skilled artistry.
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reply by the author on 23-Feb-2021
What an adorable photo! You've captured the child's instinctive feel for movement - her inner ballerina. She is a delight to all who see her chubby little legs and toes mimicking more skilled artistry. Your poem itself is skilled artistry.
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Comment Written 23-Feb-2021
reply by the author on 23-Feb-2021
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Hey there Lisa. Thank you so much. I just loved those little chubby legs and thought they matched the verse. Hugs, and thanks again.
Melissa
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I guess someone must be holding her up in the photo... those little toes don't look too secure.
Comment from R56Ma3
I love your poem, it flows quite nicely just like the little ballerina dancing. I can see her doing her moves in my mind and the picture, I find...very cute! R56ma3
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reply by the author on 23-Feb-2021
I love your poem, it flows quite nicely just like the little ballerina dancing. I can see her doing her moves in my mind and the picture, I find...very cute! R56ma3
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Comment Written 23-Feb-2021
reply by the author on 23-Feb-2021
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Hello there. Thanks so much... I loved using that photo to enhance the verse and think those chubby toes are adorable. I really appreciate your comments!
Melissa
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You're very welcome