Comment from rwilliam

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OH WOW! I forgot just how good of a writer you are girl! This held my attention the entire chapter. It went by fast and I haven't read anything in along time the does that for me. Exciting.

You did a wonderful job of writing this scene. I could see it just like a movie. Even though Have missed so much of your story, I was still hooked.

Wonderful writing. I am so PROUD of you!

 Comment Written 01-Mar-2021

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reply by the author on 02-Mar-2021

Awww... thanks so much! :)

I'm thrilled you enjoyed the chapter. I have been so busy lately, and I've had some health issues, so it's hard to even find time to put chapters in FanStory, but I want to continue to put each chapter of the new book I'm working on because everyone is so helpful here. It sure saves me money when readers catch mistakes that I look over. That's less I have to pay my editor.
And I haven't forgot you. We still need to get together too! I hope you all are doing good. That weather we had was awful.
Thanks again for taking the time to read my chapter and give such great feedback. I noticed you placed some new writing here. Sorry I haven't had time to read it. I promise, I will do that. There's too much to do and so little time in the day. Argg!

Big hugs,
Shana :)

reply by rwilliam on 03-Mar-2021

First, don't worry about reading my work. I'm just getting back to writing and so it's just...stuff. LOL.
Sorry to hear you've been under the weather. I hope you're feeling better. Yes, we survived the winter weather. Shew. :-D

Comment from Gert sherwood

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A chapter in the book THE CURSE
Kill for Me
scongrove this chapter in your book, Yes held my full attention.
And here I am waiting to read if Joseph is going to bid the Shadow's command to stop seeing Carrie!.
Gert

 Comment Written 24-Feb-2021

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reply by the author on 25-Feb-2021

Thanks so much, Gert :)
Wow! You just made my day! And I was worried this chapter would be boring to readers. It took me over a week to write this since I had the worst case of writer's block. Glad it worked out and you enjoyed it my friend. Thanks for the awesome review!

Sincerely,
Shana :)

reply by Gert sherwood on 25-Feb-2021

You are welcome scongrove
Gert

Comment from Mistydawn

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The poor guy, I feel so sorry for him having to go through all of this, being forced to do things he doesn't want to, living with such fear. I wish there were a way to help him make the shadow disappear. Your story is very well-written, interesting from start to finish. I enjoyed the conversation between him and Carrie. It's so cute, playful. I'm glad he got away from his therapist when he did. It almost seemed like the shadow was about to win. As always, I look forward to reading more.

 Comment Written 23-Feb-2021

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reply by the author on 24-Feb-2021

Thanks so much, Mistydawn :)

I do enjoy reading your feedback. I love the way you get in to the story. This is the biggest reward for writing. You give me that boost to keep on going. :)
I have to say... it took me almost a full week to write this scene. I had terrible writer's block. Finally, this just came to me. I'm glad you liked it. Now, it's time to get busy on the next chapter. Wish me luck.

Big hugs,
Shana :)

reply by Mistydawn on 24-Feb-2021

Your story, the characters are so realistic, that when I read your story, I feel like I'm visiting with old friends.
I had a similar experience this week, wrote myself in a corner, and couldn't figure a way out. Can't send an illegal immigrant with a premature baby to the hospital and not expect questions, heat.
Should've thought of that sooner.
I would wish you luck, but you don't need it, you've got this.

reply by the author on 25-Feb-2021

Aww... you're awesome! :)
I've been checked on some of the things I've written too. That's why I love to share on this site. It's so great to have other eyes on my writing. FanStory has been a blessing. Plus all the helpful advice here saves me money in the long run. The less mistakes I have, the less I have to pay my editor when he gets the final manuscript.

Comment from royowen

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I think Joseph's come to a place where he needs some real help, his therapist discovered another voice in the tape recording, despite the fact that the shadow said, "Impossible", he decides, because of his love for Carrie, that he must break off their relationship to keep her safe, that is love, denying oneself is one of the feelings. There's a film called "Magnificent obsession" where a freewheeling Batchelor causes injury to a relationship he has, he stops being a "cad" and to cure her, becomes a doctor to find a way to heal her. His, of course, was a different obsession. Beautifully written dear girl, you know how love works, bless you, Roy

 Comment Written 23-Feb-2021

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reply by the author on 24-Feb-2021

Thanks so much, Roy :)

I'm glad you enjoyed this one. It was hard to create. It took me a full week to write this scene. I had the worst case of writer's block. Glad it's over.
Joseph is definitely fighting the Shadow. The moment he found true love, things changed. And now he wants to live a normal life. It's definitely going to be challenging for Joseph as he fights for what he wants.
Thanks for all your encouragement. It really means a lot to me.
Always your fan,
Shana :)

reply by royowen on 24-Feb-2021

Bless you Shana

Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear

Excellent

This Chapter in continuation of the Supernatural Fiction speaks expressively, boldly thru' narrative taletelling, fostered by a reasoned plot development, coupled with ample appropriate, interesting and realistic dialogues, ends with a resolved curious ending; well said, well done; thanks for sharing this. ALCREATOR

 Comment Written 23-Feb-2021

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reply by the author on 24-Feb-2021

Thanks so much, Alcreator :)

I'm thrilled you enjoyed the chapter. I am glad I was finally able to get over my writer's block. It took me a full week to write this scene.

Thanks again for all your kind words and support!
Sincerely,
Shana :)

Comment from fm wright

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First, of all, like the title. The way you ended it has me in great suspense as to what will happen to Joseph, also his relationship with Carrie, as well as Dr. Mendoza and does Carrie's boss Veronica remember what happened, and if so what will she do? All exciting things to look forward to finding out.The pictures suit the story well.

 Comment Written 23-Feb-2021

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reply by the author on 24-Feb-2021

Thanks so much, Faye :)

I'm so happy you liked the chapter. I was worried it was too boring. I had the worst case of writer's block. It took me more than a week to write this scene. I'm certainly glad I moved through it. Whew!
Sometimes it's hard to put down into words what your mind imagines and also write it where it makes sense. LOL!
Thanks again for all your kind words and support. As always, you encourage me to keep on writing. :)

Big hugs,
Shana :)

reply by fm wright on 24-Feb-2021

Yes, it can be hard to transfer one's thoughts into words. Good to see that you made it though.
Hugs,
Faye