A Happy Heart
Start the day with a smile61 total reviews
Comment from Pam (respa)
-I like the theme you
chose to write about, jaybird.
-Your poems always have
a good word to share.
-You have many good examples
of things we may do or
say that have negative
impact on our health and well being.
-However, we do need to see
"the beauty of God's golden skies."
-Well done; have a great day!
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-I like the theme you
chose to write about, jaybird.
-Your poems always have
a good word to share.
-You have many good examples
of things we may do or
say that have negative
impact on our health and well being.
-However, we do need to see
"the beauty of God's golden skies."
-Well done; have a great day!
Comment Written 23-Feb-2021
Comment from Abby Wilson-hand
WOW!!! MY friend you so hit me hard with this poem brought tears to my eyes. For I have been very angry, just lost my dad to covid. I'm angry at the world even took it out on God but I asked God to forgive me for blaming him for taking my father from me. He's the only man in my 49 years on this earth that loved me every single day of my life and now he's gone. What a beautiful poem my favorite of the week I usually hoard my 6 stars but this is worthy of all of them
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WOW!!! MY friend you so hit me hard with this poem brought tears to my eyes. For I have been very angry, just lost my dad to covid. I'm angry at the world even took it out on God but I asked God to forgive me for blaming him for taking my father from me. He's the only man in my 49 years on this earth that loved me every single day of my life and now he's gone. What a beautiful poem my favorite of the week I usually hoard my 6 stars but this is worthy of all of them
Comment Written 23-Feb-2021
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
An uplifting write here and keeping our heart happy is all about infusing ourselves with good thoughts and positive things in our life. I enjoyed your poem, have a wonderful day, love Dolly x
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An uplifting write here and keeping our heart happy is all about infusing ourselves with good thoughts and positive things in our life. I enjoyed your poem, have a wonderful day, love Dolly x
Comment Written 23-Feb-2021
Comment from LaTessa
I agree that you should definitely start your day with a smile. A positive attitude brings positive things etc into your life! You did a great job writing this poem. The flow is nice and I love the message. Good job :)
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I agree that you should definitely start your day with a smile. A positive attitude brings positive things etc into your life! You did a great job writing this poem. The flow is nice and I love the message. Good job :)
Comment Written 23-Feb-2021
Comment from Mia Twysted
Once again a wonderful piece. Always encouraging people to look beyond the hard and trouble times. You are so energetic with your pieces. Very well done again.
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Once again a wonderful piece. Always encouraging people to look beyond the hard and trouble times. You are so energetic with your pieces. Very well done again.
Comment Written 22-Feb-2021
Comment from nomi338
Thank you for this submission. Even after many years on this planet, I still find it difficult to forgive the utter meanness and petty nature of some people. Why do some people find pleasure in hurting others who have done nothing to them? It Hurts so much, having to see the results of all this blind hatred. Your poem address some useful advise, unfortunately, some of the very people who could benefit from taking this advise, will just ignore it and continue being haters.
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Thank you for this submission. Even after many years on this planet, I still find it difficult to forgive the utter meanness and petty nature of some people. Why do some people find pleasure in hurting others who have done nothing to them? It Hurts so much, having to see the results of all this blind hatred. Your poem address some useful advise, unfortunately, some of the very people who could benefit from taking this advise, will just ignore it and continue being haters.
Comment Written 22-Feb-2021
Comment from Teri7
Jaybird, This is a very lovely, well written and very true poem you have penned so full of encouragement for these times. Thank you so much for sharing. Blessings, Teri
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Jaybird, This is a very lovely, well written and very true poem you have penned so full of encouragement for these times. Thank you so much for sharing. Blessings, Teri
Comment Written 22-Feb-2021
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
What a well-written poem with a great message. Your rhymes work well, the lines read smooth, and the message is so true--one that we all need to believe and follow everyday.
Thanks for sharing.
Respectfully, Jan
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What a well-written poem with a great message. Your rhymes work well, the lines read smooth, and the message is so true--one that we all need to believe and follow everyday.
Thanks for sharing.
Respectfully, Jan
Comment Written 22-Feb-2021
Comment from Mary Vigasin
Beautifully written poem of being joyful. Anger and hate can eat away at your life and soul.
I always look forward to your work as it is inspirational and uplifting.
Regards,
Mary
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Beautifully written poem of being joyful. Anger and hate can eat away at your life and soul.
I always look forward to your work as it is inspirational and uplifting.
Regards,
Mary
Comment Written 22-Feb-2021
Comment from zanya
The couplet summarises beautifully the theme and message of this poem= to try to smile through our troubles and woes however difficult that may be for us - an optimistic tone
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The couplet summarises beautifully the theme and message of this poem= to try to smile through our troubles and woes however difficult that may be for us - an optimistic tone
Comment Written 22-Feb-2021
