One Stormy Night
Strange things happened...15 total reviews
Comment from Joanne Gill-Maddick
This is a nicely written poem with good use of the suggested words. It has a great flow and rhyme. Excellent photo to go with your words. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 22-Feb-2021
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This is a nicely written poem with good use of the suggested words. It has a great flow and rhyme. Excellent photo to go with your words. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 22-Feb-2021
reply by the author on 22-Feb-2021
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Thank you for reading my poem and for this great review. :)
Comment from WriterHeather
This is a magnificent entry into the contest! I am so seriously impressed! You have written such a sad, haunting, beautiful, and elaborate story! This is such unique approach. You should feel proud of this one!
reply by the author on 22-Feb-2021
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This is a magnificent entry into the contest! I am so seriously impressed! You have written such a sad, haunting, beautiful, and elaborate story! This is such unique approach. You should feel proud of this one!
Comment Written 22-Feb-2021
reply by the author on 22-Feb-2021
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Thank you for this fantastic review, and the six stars. It's very appreciated. :)
Comment from E. Denison
This is a great bit of storytelling for the "use these words" contest. I like the narrative that you pulled throughout the poem, and I think it is a unique approach to this contest. Your entry is well-written overall and really keeps the reader engaged. Good job - thank you for sharing and good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 22-Feb-2021
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This is a great bit of storytelling for the "use these words" contest. I like the narrative that you pulled throughout the poem, and I think it is a unique approach to this contest. Your entry is well-written overall and really keeps the reader engaged. Good job - thank you for sharing and good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 22-Feb-2021
reply by the author on 22-Feb-2021
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Thank you for this nice review. I thought it was a bit long, but I'm into ghost stories, so I took a chance. Thanks again. :)
Comment from Susan Newell
Well, that was quite a story told in verse. This would have done well as prose in the ghost story contest. It has a nice non-spooky, settling feel to it. A definite contender.
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reply by the author on 22-Feb-2021
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Well, that was quite a story told in verse. This would have done well as prose in the ghost story contest. It has a nice non-spooky, settling feel to it. A definite contender.
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Comment Written 22-Feb-2021
reply by the author on 22-Feb-2021
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Thanks, I didn't know about the ghost story contest, but I'm not that great at writing stories. I usually stick to poetry..lol. Thanks for reading my poem. :)
Comment from Peeves
Interesting use of the prompts, you captured the eeriness of such an encounter....."She spoke in whispers barely heard"... and " Hurry along, your family waits", sends a bit of chill down my spine. A well crafted ghost story.
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reply by the author on 22-Feb-2021
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Interesting use of the prompts, you captured the eeriness of such an encounter....."She spoke in whispers barely heard"... and " Hurry along, your family waits", sends a bit of chill down my spine. A well crafted ghost story.
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Comment Written 22-Feb-2021
reply by the author on 22-Feb-2021
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Thank you for this great review, I appreciate you taking time to read my poem:)
