Comment from cupa tea

Excellent

I love the image you put with your poem. It goes along with your poem nicely. I saw nothing to change. Everything was fairly neatly put together...Good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 25-Feb-2021

Comment from Joanne Gill-Maddick

Excellent

This is a very well written poem. You've made excellent use of the suggested words. Great flow and rhyme scheme. Very well done. Great photo to go with your poem. Good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 22-Feb-2021

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reply by the author on 22-Feb-2021

Thanks for your review. Glad you enjoyed.

Comment from E. Denison

Excellent

Well done with this. The rhyme and style are easy to read and tell a familiar story. The photo and coloration as well are appropriate for the contest, and unless I'm mistaken, I believe you flowed through each of the required terms nicely. Thank you for sharing and good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 22-Feb-2021

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reply by the author on 22-Feb-2021

Thanks for your review. Glad you enjoyed.

Comment from Iza Deleanu

Exceptional

Love this poem and this stanza is so gothic:"
The window is a'rattlin'
As winds pick up the pace
Tree limbs blown across the ground
Please let us in your place
" I am expecting a ghost to crash the party. Thank you for sharing and good luck with your writings.

 Comment Written 22-Feb-2021

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reply by the author on 22-Feb-2021

Thanks for your review. I wasn't even thinking of the gothic side of that stanza when I wrote it. Nice to hear a different view on it.

Comment from rjuselius

Exceptional

This is an exceptional piece of poetry dear anonymous! The imagery is lushful and the message is insightful. Bravo my friend!
Thank you for sharing!
Good luck!
Blessings and a larger than life hug!
Rebekka x

 Comment Written 22-Feb-2021

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reply by the author on 22-Feb-2021

Thank you for a very positive review and of course the six. Both are appreciated.

Comment from Susan Newell

Excellent

This s a well written expression of experiencing a thunderstorm and its aftereffects. Although, I don't believe God throws temper tantrums. :-) well done.

 Comment Written 22-Feb-2021

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reply by the author on 22-Feb-2021

Thanks for your review. It wouldn?t surprise me if God gets a little annoyed with us at times.

Comment from Anne Johnston

Excellent

A very well written poem using the words suggested. Good rhyming and paints a vivid picture of the thunderstorm. You have chosen a good picture to illustrate.

 Comment Written 22-Feb-2021

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reply by the author on 22-Feb-2021

Thanks for your review. Glad you enjoyed.

reply by Anne Johnston on 22-Feb-2021

You are welcome