Comment from rhonnie69

Exceptional

CIAO POET: This is a job well done through your wit and you. You have taken me back to the old Testament of our Holy Bible here. This posting reminds me of the book of, EXODUS, and it's 14th chapter. You captured it here in just three lines and six words. Good work, poet. God bless you. cordially: rhonnie69.

 Comment Written 24-Feb-2021

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reply by the author on 25-Feb-2021

Ciao Rhonnie!

I appreciate your support but you need to stop giving me all your extra stars .. you have other fans .. ( wink)

Glad you liked the theme .. I tried to make it rhyme too( biggrin)

reply by rhonnie69 on 25-Feb-2021

Ciao, my dear modest lady. A gold star poet, enters a gold star poem...she earns and deserves a gold star rating. You knew I was going to love the theme when you wrote it. Your rhyme was right on time. (biggrin) God bless you, Tempeste. cordilly: rhonnie69.

Comment from Sugarray77

Excellent

You have written a very good short verse that incorporates a ton of meaning into your vivid poem. Great job and I enjoyed reading it... wish you luck!

Melissa

 Comment Written 23-Feb-2021

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reply by the author on 25-Feb-2021

Glad you enjoyed the read Sugarray!

The contest is over . I got two votes( laugh) better than the time before ...

...when I got zero votes ..that was kinda depressing ( sigh)

Looking forward to doing better next time ( thumb up)



Keep safe !

Comment from dragonpoet

Excellent

This is a terse and well written mono-rhyme recap of what happen to the people in the Promised Land several times in the Bible. Along with Sodom and Gamorrah.
Good luck in the contest.
Keep writing and stay healthy.
dragonpoet

 Comment Written 23-Feb-2021

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reply by the author on 25-Feb-2021

Thank you for reviewing my poem ..

Where I can I try to offer some rhyme ( biggrin)

Stay safe you too!

reply by dragonpoet on 25-Feb-2021

You're welcome. I'll try
dp