Sore Losers
Tyburn poetry3 total reviews
Comment from Susan Newell
You did well with this challenging prompt -- although you made me a little dizzy. And I definitely don't want to hang out with those sore losers. I lose all the time, but I don't get either surly or churly. (At least I hope I don't.)
reply by the author on 21-Feb-2021
You did well with this challenging prompt -- although you made me a little dizzy. And I definitely don't want to hang out with those sore losers. I lose all the time, but I don't get either surly or churly. (At least I hope I don't.)
Comment Written 21-Feb-2021
reply by the author on 21-Feb-2021
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Haha Susan. I am sure you do not get surly. :). Thanks so much.
Comment from Carol Hillebrenner
Good job with this unusual poetry form. Also good job with knowing your athletes. And I like the picture also. Good luck with this and all your future writing efforts.
reply by the author on 21-Feb-2021
Good job with this unusual poetry form. Also good job with knowing your athletes. And I like the picture also. Good luck with this and all your future writing efforts.
Comment Written 21-Feb-2021
reply by the author on 21-Feb-2021
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Thank you very much.
Comment from Raul1
I like how you did this tyburn poem. I can understand it. This poem meets the requirements for the contest. Excellent work! No grammatical errors. Best wishes in the contest!
reply by the author on 21-Feb-2021
I like how you did this tyburn poem. I can understand it. This poem meets the requirements for the contest. Excellent work! No grammatical errors. Best wishes in the contest!
Comment Written 21-Feb-2021
reply by the author on 21-Feb-2021
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Thank you Raul.
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You're welcome!