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Comment from Miss Cookie Atkinson
I love the artwork that was choose for us to use they are a perfect match Your word were very exciting and you wrote what love is about
Thank you for sharing a true love poem you wrote it with class
Cookie
reply by the author on 17-Mar-2021
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I love the artwork that was choose for us to use they are a perfect match Your word were very exciting and you wrote what love is about
Thank you for sharing a true love poem you wrote it with class
Cookie
Comment Written 17-Mar-2021
reply by the author on 17-Mar-2021
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Thank you so much, Cookie, for your lovely feedback. Best wishes, Debra:)
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Your very welcome have a blessed day
Cookie
Comment from Sally Law
This is a woman scored and looks like she won't forget as the verse repeats itself like the hurtful memory. Very well done, like a juicy steak. Sending you my best today as always and best wishes for the challenge,
Sally XOs...
reply by the author on 22-Feb-2021
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This is a woman scored and looks like she won't forget as the verse repeats itself like the hurtful memory. Very well done, like a juicy steak. Sending you my best today as always and best wishes for the challenge,
Sally XOs...
Comment Written 21-Feb-2021
reply by the author on 22-Feb-2021
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Thank you, Sal, for your feedback.
Best wishes as always, Debra :) x
Comment from Elizabeth Emerald
Shocking segue earns your stars in itself: and see him naked 'tween her thighs...A stunning change in theme after the deceptively romantic beginning.
for him and [I=>ME]
reply by the author on 22-Feb-2021
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Shocking segue earns your stars in itself: and see him naked 'tween her thighs...A stunning change in theme after the deceptively romantic beginning.
for him and [I=>ME]
Comment Written 21-Feb-2021
reply by the author on 22-Feb-2021
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Hi Liz, thanks for your fab feedback :)
I knew you'd pull me on the 'him and I' line LOL - I would've been disappointed if you hadn't, having read your piece the other day!
Best wishes, Debra
Comment from robyn corum
Debra,
OOoohhhh... Nice. I'm sitting here trying to figure out those white gloves, but the rest of this is quite appealing to me and has me thinking I may have figured you all wrong. hahaha
All this time, I've been thinking you were a sweet little gal - but your true side may be peeking through. hehehe
It is awfully hard to write a triolet where those repeating lines don't come crashing down like thundering bangles. So this was nice. Your lines fit beautifully and flowed nicely- and your enjambment worked well, too.
I had never noticed that white glove and at first, I event thought maybe you edited to add that to the image. Then I thought - no she's gonna kill him after this last kiss! OoooOOOooo... What a horrible evil lady! I like it!!! hahaha
Nice job. I'd like to see more into your thought process - but then,, that might take away some of the fun, too. Kudos!
reply by the author on 22-Feb-2021
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Debra,
OOoohhhh... Nice. I'm sitting here trying to figure out those white gloves, but the rest of this is quite appealing to me and has me thinking I may have figured you all wrong. hahaha
All this time, I've been thinking you were a sweet little gal - but your true side may be peeking through. hehehe
It is awfully hard to write a triolet where those repeating lines don't come crashing down like thundering bangles. So this was nice. Your lines fit beautifully and flowed nicely- and your enjambment worked well, too.
I had never noticed that white glove and at first, I event thought maybe you edited to add that to the image. Then I thought - no she's gonna kill him after this last kiss! OoooOOOooo... What a horrible evil lady! I like it!!! hahaha
Nice job. I'd like to see more into your thought process - but then,, that might take away some of the fun, too. Kudos!
Comment Written 21-Feb-2021
reply by the author on 22-Feb-2021
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LOL! Thanks for the great feedback, Robyn :)
Damn right she's gonna bump him off, the cheating, good-for-nothing, toe-rag! And the white gloves....? No fingerprints left behind on his cheating corpse ;)
The more I looked at the picture, the more that white glove kept waving at me!
Best wishes, Debra :)
Comment from Jimmy Hogg
Cool, I wasn't aware of this poetry structure until now. I enjoyed this, although I'm curious as to the significance of 'the white glove'
Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 22-Feb-2021
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Cool, I wasn't aware of this poetry structure until now. I enjoyed this, although I'm curious as to the significance of 'the white glove'
Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 21-Feb-2021
reply by the author on 22-Feb-2021
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Hello Jimmy,
Thanks for your feedback :)
The white glove features in the artwork... Our protagonist isn't taking any chances of her fingerprints being found on her cheating husband's corpse ;)
Best wishes, Debra
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Oh cool! Thank you.
Comment from royowen
This is a slightly saucy little poem Debra. The triolet is a good thing to write, when one only writes five lines, but it's the perfect one for the picture this prompt, well done my friend, an excellent post, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 22-Feb-2021
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This is a slightly saucy little poem Debra. The triolet is a good thing to write, when one only writes five lines, but it's the perfect one for the picture this prompt, well done my friend, an excellent post, blessings Roy
Comment Written 21-Feb-2021
reply by the author on 22-Feb-2021
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Thank you for your lovely feedback, Roy :)
Best wishes, Debra
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Welcome Debra
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
This sounds like betrayal and infidelity here and I enjoyed the form, you rhymes and your poem is poignant and a perfect match for the picture Debra, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 22-Feb-2021
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This sounds like betrayal and infidelity here and I enjoyed the form, you rhymes and your poem is poignant and a perfect match for the picture Debra, love Dolly x
Comment Written 21-Feb-2021
reply by the author on 22-Feb-2021
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Thank you for your lovely feedback, Dolly :)
Best wishes, Debra
