Heavy Weather
Contest Entry3 total reviews
Comment from cupa tea
I can relate to that line...We just moved into our home and we've had to deal with deep mud when it rains because everything is'nt settled down yet.
The grass is soiled wet,
the smell of ugly rain and deep mud,
Great poem, however...Good Luck
reply by the author on 25-Feb-2021
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I can relate to that line...We just moved into our home and we've had to deal with deep mud when it rains because everything is'nt settled down yet.
The grass is soiled wet,
the smell of ugly rain and deep mud,
Great poem, however...Good Luck
Comment Written 25-Feb-2021
reply by the author on 25-Feb-2021
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Thank you!
Comment from Goodadvicechan
A good poem describing the thunder storm. It meets the requirement of using the six words.
Snow storms can be more dangerous but strong winds are just equally dangerous. AS the poem suggests; "... hope it ends soon."
reply by the author on 21-Feb-2021
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A good poem describing the thunder storm. It meets the requirement of using the six words.
Snow storms can be more dangerous but strong winds are just equally dangerous. AS the poem suggests; "... hope it ends soon."
Comment Written 21-Feb-2021
reply by the author on 21-Feb-2021
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Thank you!
Comment from Jean Lutz1
Well used words. A minor typo in third line from bottom -- a extra "P". Great artwork to depict what is going on. Luke 10:18 Jesus said unto them, "I saw Satan fall from heaven like lightening." Best wishes with your entry.
reply by the author on 21-Feb-2021
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Well used words. A minor typo in third line from bottom -- a extra "P". Great artwork to depict what is going on. Luke 10:18 Jesus said unto them, "I saw Satan fall from heaven like lightening." Best wishes with your entry.
Comment Written 21-Feb-2021
reply by the author on 21-Feb-2021
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Thank you! I have fixed the mistake.
