The Hand
Very short true story7 total reviews
Comment from poetwatch
Well, Lulube, when one least expects it the sea will claim you, I know I was always going to the beach down Brownsville, Texas, way. I loved it, yet, many times I could hear it calling me. It was a haunting feeling that lured me to walk forward its call. If dad hadn't called out to me... well I don't know. Good entry for the An Unexpected Rescue.
reply by the author on 24-Feb-2021
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Well, Lulube, when one least expects it the sea will claim you, I know I was always going to the beach down Brownsville, Texas, way. I loved it, yet, many times I could hear it calling me. It was a haunting feeling that lured me to walk forward its call. If dad hadn't called out to me... well I don't know. Good entry for the An Unexpected Rescue.
Comment Written 23-Feb-2021
reply by the author on 24-Feb-2021
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not only does it call to you but grabs you, throws you around, tumbles you and drags you and it never lets up, it just keeps on coming. thxs for your awesome review
lulube
Comment from Begin Again
A guardian angel to the rescue for sure! You were very lucky to have her reach out to you. Especially since your new granddaughter needed the chance to meet her grandpa. Special moments.
Thank you for entering the contest and I wish you luck!
reply by the author on 23-Feb-2021
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A guardian angel to the rescue for sure! You were very lucky to have her reach out to you. Especially since your new granddaughter needed the chance to meet her grandpa. Special moments.
Thank you for entering the contest and I wish you luck!
Comment Written 23-Feb-2021
reply by the author on 23-Feb-2021
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thxs for the luck and awesome comments. just letting you know I'm a gramma
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Sorry about that....Smiles to Gramma!
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lol no worries!!! lol
lulube
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lol no worries!!! lol
lulube
Comment from cupa tea
Good story...Good save...I saw nothing to correct...Story flowed well and sentence structure was pretty good. I was easy to read...Good luck in the contest...
reply by the author on 23-Feb-2021
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Good story...Good save...I saw nothing to correct...Story flowed well and sentence structure was pretty good. I was easy to read...Good luck in the contest...
Comment Written 22-Feb-2021
reply by the author on 23-Feb-2021
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thxs for your awesome comments and luck
Comment from Gert sherwood
Hello unknown author of your short story of unexpected rescue is beautiful short story about what I call an amazing time in your life of being rescued by the hand of one of God's angels.
Gert
reply by the author on 22-Feb-2021
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Hello unknown author of your short story of unexpected rescue is beautiful short story about what I call an amazing time in your life of being rescued by the hand of one of God's angels.
Gert
Comment Written 21-Feb-2021
reply by the author on 22-Feb-2021
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Definitely an angel to me thxs for your review
Comment from country ranch writer
This is very well done and I could almost feel the waves trying to take me also out to sea. Lucky that fear kady came along when she did for your sake.
reply by the author on 21-Feb-2021
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This is very well done and I could almost feel the waves trying to take me also out to sea. Lucky that fear kady came along when she did for your sake.
Comment Written 21-Feb-2021
reply by the author on 21-Feb-2021
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I was very lucky, Barb. I honestly thought I was going to drown. thxs for your review.
lulube
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So glad you are still here my friend I would be lost with out ya
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always here and if not you got my email?
lulube
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Smiles😱🙈💁😎
Comment from Debra White
Hey Lulube,
Thank the Lord for the lady who saved you that day.
What an absolutely awful experience for you.
Your recollection of what happened that day is well written. I'd like to say I enjoyed reading it, but I found it harrowing to be honest!
Good luck in the contest.
Best wishes, Debra :)
reply by the author on 21-Feb-2021
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Hey Lulube,
Thank the Lord for the lady who saved you that day.
What an absolutely awful experience for you.
Your recollection of what happened that day is well written. I'd like to say I enjoyed reading it, but I found it harrowing to be honest!
Good luck in the contest.
Best wishes, Debra :)
Comment Written 21-Feb-2021
reply by the author on 21-Feb-2021
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i still dream about that day. the angels sent that lady, I'm sure of it. thxs for your great comments and review, Debra
lulube
Comment from T.E. Loper
I've spent many hours swimming and surfing in all kinds of seas. We're so small and the sea is so vast that it doesn't even sense we're there. That kind of "natural power" is literally awesome and when felt, never forgotten. Some in a similar situation to yours are swallowed by the waves and lost.
Thank you for this little tale of providence, and for the stranger whose hand allowed you to share it with us.
Tom
reply by the author on 21-Feb-2021
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I've spent many hours swimming and surfing in all kinds of seas. We're so small and the sea is so vast that it doesn't even sense we're there. That kind of "natural power" is literally awesome and when felt, never forgotten. Some in a similar situation to yours are swallowed by the waves and lost.
Thank you for this little tale of providence, and for the stranger whose hand allowed you to share it with us.
Tom
Comment Written 21-Feb-2021
reply by the author on 21-Feb-2021
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You are right, I was a very lucky lady that day. thxs for awesome comments in your review.
lulube
