It Is Finished
Jesus' Final Words33 total reviews
Comment from Teri7
I wish I had six stars to give you for this very well written Repetition poem that says so much! It is finished was what was heard on that day! Beautiful presentation and very well written and true words. Best wishes in the contest. blessings, Teri
reply by the author on 18-Jun-2021
I wish I had six stars to give you for this very well written Repetition poem that says so much! It is finished was what was heard on that day! Beautiful presentation and very well written and true words. Best wishes in the contest. blessings, Teri
Comment Written 18-Jun-2021
reply by the author on 18-Jun-2021
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Teri,
Thanks so much for your review, very kind comments, and best wishes; they are greatly appreciated.
Blessings...
Comment from TPAC
It is finished, defining a long sequence of trying events final summed up conclusion. God did not create death, believing man's concepts prevailing their faith did, finding the species holding to the projected lie, forgetting the proclaimed truth by God. Religion verses truth.
reply by the author on 18-Jun-2021
It is finished, defining a long sequence of trying events final summed up conclusion. God did not create death, believing man's concepts prevailing their faith did, finding the species holding to the projected lie, forgetting the proclaimed truth by God. Religion verses truth.
Comment Written 18-Jun-2021
reply by the author on 18-Jun-2021
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Thanks so much for your review and comments; they are greatly appreciated.
Blessings...
Comment from dragonpoet
This poem uses the repetition of the contest well. It could almost be a praise song. These are his last in only one of the Gospels. But it works here as a good refrain
Good luck in the contest.
Keep writing and stay healthy
dragonpoet
reply by the author on 18-Jun-2021
This poem uses the repetition of the contest well. It could almost be a praise song. These are his last in only one of the Gospels. But it works here as a good refrain
Good luck in the contest.
Keep writing and stay healthy
dragonpoet
Comment Written 18-Jun-2021
reply by the author on 18-Jun-2021
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Thanks so much for your review, comments, and best wishes.
Blessings...
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My pleasure. Have a great weekend.
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Comment from Janet Foor
A beautiful rhyming repetition poem with a powerful message.
You chose an excellent phase to be repeated and a perfect picture..
Very nicely done.
Blessings
Janet
reply by the author on 18-Jun-2021
A beautiful rhyming repetition poem with a powerful message.
You chose an excellent phase to be repeated and a perfect picture..
Very nicely done.
Blessings
Janet
Comment Written 18-Jun-2021
reply by the author on 18-Jun-2021
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Janet,
Thanks so much for your review and very kind comments; they are greatly appreciated.
Blessings...
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Jesus' Final Words
It Is Finished
Nice spiritual entry for the Repetition Poem writing prompt contest.Your poem flows well. It draws on emotions and it presents strong images.
reply by the author on 18-Jun-2021
Jesus' Final Words
It Is Finished
Nice spiritual entry for the Repetition Poem writing prompt contest.Your poem flows well. It draws on emotions and it presents strong images.
Comment Written 18-Jun-2021
reply by the author on 18-Jun-2021
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Thanks so much for your review and comments.
Have a great day.
Comment from nomi338
And one day soon, the political and social system under which the world is currently living, will experience the words "It is finished." which will signal the end to a world dominated by Satan the Devil. Mankind's salvation can only be fully achieved by the destruction of Satan and his system of things.
reply by the author on 18-Jun-2021
And one day soon, the political and social system under which the world is currently living, will experience the words "It is finished." which will signal the end to a world dominated by Satan the Devil. Mankind's salvation can only be fully achieved by the destruction of Satan and his system of things.
Comment Written 18-Jun-2021
reply by the author on 18-Jun-2021
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Thanks so much for your review and wise comments; I totally agree.
Have a wonderful and blessed day.
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
That was a brilliant repetition poem, and one that everyone knows is true. Those words, 'It is finished...' When I hear them, or read them, I always go goose-pimply. I really enjoyed reading your lovely poem, and wish you the best of luck in the contest. :)) Sandra
reply by the author on 18-Jun-2021
That was a brilliant repetition poem, and one that everyone knows is true. Those words, 'It is finished...' When I hear them, or read them, I always go goose-pimply. I really enjoyed reading your lovely poem, and wish you the best of luck in the contest. :)) Sandra
Comment Written 18-Jun-2021
reply by the author on 18-Jun-2021
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Sandra,
Thanks so much for your review, very kind comments, and best wishes.
Have a wonderful day.
Blessings...
Comment from Begin Again
Your faith shines through your words in the beautiful spiritual poem you havew written and shared with us. The Lord promised to save us and keep us safe and he gave his life for that...We in return should open our hearts and honor him in all ways. Smiles, Carol
reply by the author on 18-Jun-2021
Your faith shines through your words in the beautiful spiritual poem you havew written and shared with us. The Lord promised to save us and keep us safe and he gave his life for that...We in return should open our hearts and honor him in all ways. Smiles, Carol
Comment Written 18-Jun-2021
reply by the author on 18-Jun-2021
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Thanks so much for your review and comments.
Have a blessed day.
Comment from Sherry Asbury
Outstanding - wish I had 6 stars... Best of luck to you in the contest, I feel your entry is very strong. Christ Jesus is never finished in my life - His sacrifice has blessed me in so many ways and I am ready for a life with Him in Heaven one day. Excellent poetry and the picture enthralled me.
reply by the author on 18-Jun-2021
Outstanding - wish I had 6 stars... Best of luck to you in the contest, I feel your entry is very strong. Christ Jesus is never finished in my life - His sacrifice has blessed me in so many ways and I am ready for a life with Him in Heaven one day. Excellent poetry and the picture enthralled me.
Comment Written 18-Jun-2021
reply by the author on 18-Jun-2021
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Sherry,
Thanks so much for your review and very kind comment; they are greatly appreciated.
Have a wonderful day.
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You are welcome!!!
Comment from Wendy G
What a beautiful thoughtful expression of faith, focussing on Jesus' death for us, finishing His work of atonement and salvation. Best wishes for this lovely entry in the contest.
reply by the author on 18-Jun-2021
What a beautiful thoughtful expression of faith, focussing on Jesus' death for us, finishing His work of atonement and salvation. Best wishes for this lovely entry in the contest.
Comment Written 18-Jun-2021
reply by the author on 18-Jun-2021
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Wendy,
Thanks so much for your review and best wishes.
Have a wonderful day.
Blessings...