It Is Finished
Jesus' Final Words33 total reviews
Comment from Kit Nongkhlaw
I liked this poem so much that I voted for it for repetition. I feel like crying when reading this poem. I have written one poem on this same subject but in a different way and posted it in FS. Our Lord and Savior, Jesus Christ finished His works for our salvation by dying on the cross. Thanks for sharing. Kit.
reply by the author on 20-Jun-2021
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I liked this poem so much that I voted for it for repetition. I feel like crying when reading this poem. I have written one poem on this same subject but in a different way and posted it in FS. Our Lord and Savior, Jesus Christ finished His works for our salvation by dying on the cross. Thanks for sharing. Kit.
Comment Written 20-Jun-2021
reply by the author on 20-Jun-2021
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KItbok,
Thanks so much for you review and comments; they are greatly appreciated.
Blessings...Portia
Comment from Janetsue
This is a beautiful poetic telling of the Good News message. Without the Lord's sacrifice, no human could spend eternity in the presence of God. Because the price was paid in full for our sin, we can rejoice in our belief that we belong to Him forever.
reply by the author on 19-Jun-2021
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This is a beautiful poetic telling of the Good News message. Without the Lord's sacrifice, no human could spend eternity in the presence of God. Because the price was paid in full for our sin, we can rejoice in our belief that we belong to Him forever.
Comment Written 19-Jun-2021
reply by the author on 19-Jun-2021
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Spangle,
Thanks so much for your review and very kind comments; they are greatly appreciated.
Blessings...Portia
Comment from royowen
Oh yes indeed, those words mean so much more than even Christians don't understand, God took care of every malady known, the prime one being death itself, but so many other things tied up in that message. Beautifully written Portia, and excellent rhyming, articulate post, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 19-Jun-2021
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Oh yes indeed, those words mean so much more than even Christians don't understand, God took care of every malady known, the prime one being death itself, but so many other things tied up in that message. Beautifully written Portia, and excellent rhyming, articulate post, blessings Roy
Comment Written 19-Jun-2021
reply by the author on 19-Jun-2021
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Roy,
Thanks so much for your review and very kind comments; they are greatly appreciated.
Blessings, my friend...Portia
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Well done
Comment from Janice Canerdy
Your profoundly spiritual, skillfully written poem is an excellent response to the prompt. All lines are great; the "refrain" is especially good. Your description of how Jesus finished His mission on earth is biblically accurate. and so moving.
reply by the author on 19-Jun-2021
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Your profoundly spiritual, skillfully written poem is an excellent response to the prompt. All lines are great; the "refrain" is especially good. Your description of how Jesus finished His mission on earth is biblically accurate. and so moving.
Comment Written 19-Jun-2021
reply by the author on 19-Jun-2021
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Janice,
Thanks so much for your review and comments; they are greatly appreciated.
Hugs...Portia
Comment from barbara.wilkey
Yes, Jesus gave us the gift of life by dying for us. Thank you for sharing this repetition poem with us. I really enjoyed reading, it flowed like music. Good luck with the contest.
reply by the author on 19-Jun-2021
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Yes, Jesus gave us the gift of life by dying for us. Thank you for sharing this repetition poem with us. I really enjoyed reading, it flowed like music. Good luck with the contest.
Comment Written 19-Jun-2021
reply by the author on 19-Jun-2021
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Barbara,
Thank you for your review, comments, and best wishes; they are greatly appreciated.
Blessings...
Comment from RPSaxena
Hello Friend,
It's a nice piece of Spiritual Poetry meeting the desired norms, having lucid as well as perfectly matching the theme phraseology, smooth flow throughout from the beginning to the end with lovely rhyming scheme, and beautifully depicting its theme.
The most noteworthy lines are: "Jesus suffered...our last breath."
Picture enhances depth and beauty of the poem.
BEST OF LUCK in the contest.
reply by the author on 19-Jun-2021
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Hello Friend,
It's a nice piece of Spiritual Poetry meeting the desired norms, having lucid as well as perfectly matching the theme phraseology, smooth flow throughout from the beginning to the end with lovely rhyming scheme, and beautifully depicting its theme.
The most noteworthy lines are: "Jesus suffered...our last breath."
Picture enhances depth and beauty of the poem.
BEST OF LUCK in the contest.
Comment Written 19-Jun-2021
reply by the author on 19-Jun-2021
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Thanks so much for your review, very kind comments, and best wishes; they are greatly appreciated.
Have a wonderful day.
Blessings...
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Pharp, Most Welcome!
With best wishes,
~ RP
Comment from palmart
Nice poem that brings our souls to recover the real view of life and to have present the important things. To remember that He died for us to recover is always nice to remember. It gives clues on how to act in our lives accordingly. Congratulations!
reply by the author on 18-Jun-2021
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Nice poem that brings our souls to recover the real view of life and to have present the important things. To remember that He died for us to recover is always nice to remember. It gives clues on how to act in our lives accordingly. Congratulations!
Comment Written 18-Jun-2021
reply by the author on 18-Jun-2021
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Thanks so much for your review and comments.
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You`re very welcome, Pharp!!
Have a wondeful weekend!
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You are really very welcome, Lady pharp!! Keep us (your readers) on surprisese (as you usually do)!!
God Bless you!
Comment from Elizabeth Emerald
Effective use of repetition makes for a powerful piece--this would have also made a fine entry in a faith contest--the presentation is stunning and the imagery vivid!
reply by the author on 18-Jun-2021
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Effective use of repetition makes for a powerful piece--this would have also made a fine entry in a faith contest--the presentation is stunning and the imagery vivid!
Comment Written 18-Jun-2021
reply by the author on 18-Jun-2021
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Thanks so much for your review and comments.
Comment from amahra
What a beautiful poem and fantastic repeated lines you chose. I can think of no greater repeated lines. I loved the poem and felt it was well written and well rhymed. You did a great job.
reply by the author on 18-Jun-2021
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What a beautiful poem and fantastic repeated lines you chose. I can think of no greater repeated lines. I loved the poem and felt it was well written and well rhymed. You did a great job.
Comment Written 18-Jun-2021
reply by the author on 18-Jun-2021
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Amahra,
Thanks so much for your review and very kind comments.
Blessings...
Comment from Patty Palmer
This is a beautiful poem for the contest. It's easily read and captures the seriousness of the subject of the poem. The artwork is beautiful. Good luck with the contest.
Patty
reply by the author on 18-Jun-2021
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This is a beautiful poem for the contest. It's easily read and captures the seriousness of the subject of the poem. The artwork is beautiful. Good luck with the contest.
Patty
Comment Written 18-Jun-2021
reply by the author on 18-Jun-2021
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Patty,
Thanks so much for your review, very kind comments, and best wishes.
Hugs...
