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Lighthouse Beams

Lighthouse beams light up the dark night

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Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
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Hello anonymous

Beautiful entry for the 20 Syllables writing prompt contest. Good syllables count and connection between lines. The presentation is awesome.

aureate the night.... is a perfect phrase for your poem. Well done. Good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 20-Feb-2021

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Comment from Wendy G
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This is a beautiful image and also a lovely poem. They pair well. It is well-written, almost majestic with the choice of "aureate". I hope your entry does well in the contest.

 Comment Written 20-Feb-2021

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Comment from Bill Schott
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This twenty-syllable poem, Lighthouse Beams, has the proper syllable count and gives a poetic fancy to the saving light from the hardworking beacon.

 Comment Written 20-Feb-2021

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Comment from Dolly'sPoems
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Lighthouses are a dying sight these days as navigation is controlled by technology, but you brought back the memory here, much enjoyed . . .love Dolly x

 Comment Written 20-Feb-2021

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    Thank you Dolly 🙂
Comment from AnnaLinda
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Poet,

How interesting that your father was a light-keeper.
Your form is perfect and each line leads well into the
next. I really like "revolving beams" and your choice
of aureate in your final impacting line.

Beautiful presentation as well.
Looks like a winner to me.

Anna

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Comment from zanya
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These poetic words combine to create a beautiful image of light emanating from the lighthouse and forming 'a vibrant glow' lovely visual to accompany

 Comment Written 20-Feb-2021

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Comment from tfawcus
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Pure gold for the mariners, at any rate! There is a romanticism about lighthouses, their rugged and remote landscapes and their blissful solitude. I am surprised that there are not more poets among lighthouse keepers.

 Comment Written 19-Feb-2021

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Comment from Pam (respa)
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-Nice image and
presentation.
-Thanks for sharing the notes.
-You have used your 20 syllables well.
-A good topic and imagery with
"revolving beams" and
"vibrant glow."
-Good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 19-Feb-2021

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reply by Pam (respa) on 19-Feb-2021
    You are welcome.