Comment from Dolly'sPoems

Excellent

There is some sadness here as dreams are washed away never to be fulfilled and I heard the waterfall in these words doing the damage, much enjoyed, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 21-Feb-2021

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reply by the author on 21-Feb-2021

Thank you, Dolly, for commenting on and reviewing my poem. It is appreciated. Hugs and blessings.

reply by the author on 21-Feb-2021

Thank you, Dolly, for commenting on and reviewing my poem. It is appreciated. Hugs and blessings.

Comment from Mabaker12

Excellent

I can't write poetry but I admire anyone who can. So I admire you. Do you write prose, I'll look up your profile and read more of your works. Keep up your gift either poetry or prose.

 Comment Written 19-Feb-2021

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reply by the author on 19-Feb-2021

Thank you. You gave me such a great complement. I love to write, but I am just learning. You should see how much I have improved from December. Ha ha seriously, some of my stuff was pretty bad. I have a long way to go to be in the same league with some of these folks, but I am working on it. Thank you again for your kind and generous words, and for reviewing my poem. Hugs.

reply by Mabaker12 on 19-Feb-2021

You're welcome. As for improvement Fanstory seem a site we either improve or leave, some reviewers can be deadly with the red pen. Good luck

Comment from robyn corum

Excellent

Dear Mystery Writer,

This is a vivid image of the stream of icy water disappearing down the cracks in the rocks - just like so many of our dreams. Nice job. BUT I counted twice and only got 19 syllables. Count again??

Thanks!

 Comment Written 19-Feb-2021

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reply by the author on 19-Feb-2021

Thank you! I will go back and re-count again, although I counted several times. Maybe I pronounced a word wrong... Anyway, thank you for letting me know. Hugs. You're appreciated.