The Delivery
What Happened Story contest entry5 total reviews
Comment from Begin Again
Oh my - laughing but wondering how often something this disgusting probably happens in real life. Oh Gross! People are people and regardless of how gross it is, it's funny to read. Bad one on me! Smiles to you!
reply by the author on 21-Feb-2021
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Oh my - laughing but wondering how often something this disgusting probably happens in real life. Oh Gross! People are people and regardless of how gross it is, it's funny to read. Bad one on me! Smiles to you!
Comment Written 20-Feb-2021
reply by the author on 21-Feb-2021
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I couldn't resist. For some wacky reason this came to mind when I saw the contest and I just ran with it. Lol. Hopefully it doesn't happen at all, especially when I'm ordering a pizza. Haha. Thank you for the great review and stars, Carol.
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Ron
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Smiles!
Comment from Goodadvicechan
I like the picture...A cheerful delivery guy.
The story is humorous. Pizza dropped on the flor, picked it up and delivered... I hope this is fiction... and should happen in real life.
Good writing.
reply by the author on 19-Feb-2021
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I like the picture...A cheerful delivery guy.
The story is humorous. Pizza dropped on the flor, picked it up and delivered... I hope this is fiction... and should happen in real life.
Good writing.
Comment Written 19-Feb-2021
reply by the author on 19-Feb-2021
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Thank you for the great review, Good. Yeah, I put it in the author notes that this was just fiction. Lol. I actually created this picture from a few different Google Images myself. I really appreciate the generous stars. I'm glad you liked this silliness. Have yourself a great weekend.
Comment from cupa tea
Now I'm gonna have to think about ordering pizza...lol
Very good entry. Picture fits the story perfectly... I saw nothing I'd change. No typos. Good sentences....Good Luck
reply by the author on 19-Feb-2021
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Now I'm gonna have to think about ordering pizza...lol
Very good entry. Picture fits the story perfectly... I saw nothing I'd change. No typos. Good sentences....Good Luck
Comment Written 19-Feb-2021
reply by the author on 19-Feb-2021
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Thank you for the great review, cupa tea. I really appreciate the generous stars and good luck wishes. I'm glad you liked this silly piece. Have yourself a fantastic weekend.
Comment from phill doran
Hello to you
This must be the most Un-Covid Protocol thing I have read in a long time! I think you have set the pizza-delivery industry back years (well done).
Still, it is very funny and hopeful based on fantasy and not a work experience.
I wish you well with this.
cheers - stay safe...
phill
twenty dollar, I think should be hyphenated twenty-dollar...
reply by the author on 20-Feb-2021
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Hello to you
This must be the most Un-Covid Protocol thing I have read in a long time! I think you have set the pizza-delivery industry back years (well done).
Still, it is very funny and hopeful based on fantasy and not a work experience.
I wish you well with this.
cheers - stay safe...
phill
twenty dollar, I think should be hyphenated twenty-dollar...
Comment Written 19-Feb-2021
reply by the author on 20-Feb-2021
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Lol. Thank you for the great review and chuckle, Phill. Yes, it's all just fantasy. This was just the first ridiculous thing I thought of when the contest came up and I just rolled with it. Haha. Thanks for pointing out the goof too. It's fixed. I appreciate the stars, friend. Have a good one.
Ron
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
Oh my goodness! We never know what has happened to our food before it gets to us when it is in the hands of others! I shall be thinking of your story next time the pizza delivery man calls, ha ha ha, all fun post, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 20-Feb-2021
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Oh my goodness! We never know what has happened to our food before it gets to us when it is in the hands of others! I shall be thinking of your story next time the pizza delivery man calls, ha ha ha, all fun post, love Dolly x
Comment Written 19-Feb-2021
reply by the author on 20-Feb-2021
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Lol. Don't put too much thought into it. Hopefully they don't steal the toppings when they're on their way. Haha. I'm glad you liked this silly piece, Dolly. Thank you for the stars and great review.
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Ron
