The Friendship Fence
Remembering my dear friend, Lois44 total reviews
Comment from Gert sherwood
amada your poem The Friendship Fence
About your friend you had a now miss talking to her leaning on the fence, brings tears to ones face
Your memory of--her blue eyes still shone when looking at her wild blueberry bushes.
But
Months later, she didn't wake up. She lay peaceful and beautiful, her lips curved.
Gert
reply by the author on 02-Mar-2021
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amada your poem The Friendship Fence
About your friend you had a now miss talking to her leaning on the fence, brings tears to ones face
Your memory of--her blue eyes still shone when looking at her wild blueberry bushes.
But
Months later, she didn't wake up. She lay peaceful and beautiful, her lips curved.
Gert
Comment Written 02-Mar-2021
reply by the author on 02-Mar-2021
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Hi Gert, thank you so much for reading my work, again.
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You are welcome amada
Gert
Comment from Poetic Friend
Amada,
I really love this story for many reasons. It teaches one about friendship, disability, death, memories, and being neighborly.
Also, it reminds me of my mom and her neighbor. From across the fence, they shared their friendship, discussing a multitude of topics over the years. Like Lois, my mom's neighbor passed away.
I hope this poem did well in the contest.
reply by the author on 01-Mar-2021
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Amada,
I really love this story for many reasons. It teaches one about friendship, disability, death, memories, and being neighborly.
Also, it reminds me of my mom and her neighbor. From across the fence, they shared their friendship, discussing a multitude of topics over the years. Like Lois, my mom's neighbor passed away.
I hope this poem did well in the contest.
Comment Written 28-Feb-2021
reply by the author on 01-Mar-2021
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Thank you so much for this exceptional reward. I am so touched by your sentiments and your stars. Fences are for closeness, not for separation.
Comment from RGstar
Beautiful...and how well you told the story.
So nice to read such as this.
Iowa's away A few days with some problems, or this would have six stars.
Its beautiful and I am catching up.
Bravo dear friend.
My best wishes.
RG
reply by the author on 23-Feb-2021
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Beautiful...and how well you told the story.
So nice to read such as this.
Iowa's away A few days with some problems, or this would have six stars.
Its beautiful and I am catching up.
Bravo dear friend.
My best wishes.
RG
Comment Written 22-Feb-2021
reply by the author on 23-Feb-2021
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thank you so much, RG.
Comment from Anne Johnston
What a great tribute to your friend and neighbour. I can understand how every time you look at that fence, you remember the conversations and the good times you enjoyed together. The picture is perfect for your story.
reply by the author on 21-Feb-2021
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What a great tribute to your friend and neighbour. I can understand how every time you look at that fence, you remember the conversations and the good times you enjoyed together. The picture is perfect for your story.
Comment Written 21-Feb-2021
reply by the author on 21-Feb-2021
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Thank you so much for reading this true story, dear Anne.
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You are welcome
Comment from Rdfrdmom2
amada:
What a lovely, lovely tribute to your dear friend, Lois. I had an aunt in Maryland who had a dear friend which used to meet her almost every day
at their chain-link fence to chat unless the weather was extremely poor. It was always a joy to watch. Good luck in the contest.
Rdrdmom2
reply by the author on 21-Feb-2021
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amada:
What a lovely, lovely tribute to your dear friend, Lois. I had an aunt in Maryland who had a dear friend which used to meet her almost every day
at their chain-link fence to chat unless the weather was extremely poor. It was always a joy to watch. Good luck in the contest.
Rdrdmom2
Comment Written 21-Feb-2021
reply by the author on 21-Feb-2021
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Thank you for your great lines, R2.
Comment from country ranch writer
Fences can bring together friendship in a wink. A friendship that last forever even when that friend passes. You still have the memories of all the good times you all had together and her sharing her precious blue berries together.
reply by the author on 21-Feb-2021
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Fences can bring together friendship in a wink. A friendship that last forever even when that friend passes. You still have the memories of all the good times you all had together and her sharing her precious blue berries together.
Comment Written 20-Feb-2021
reply by the author on 21-Feb-2021
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Thank you so much, dear country writer.
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Smiles hugs
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
What a lovely story. When we have the gift of a friend like that, it's hard to lose them. But, what delightful memories you have. I really enjoyed your story, and I'm sure the blueberry pies were delicious. :)) Good luck in the contest. Sandra xx
reply by the author on 21-Feb-2021
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What a lovely story. When we have the gift of a friend like that, it's hard to lose them. But, what delightful memories you have. I really enjoyed your story, and I'm sure the blueberry pies were delicious. :)) Good luck in the contest. Sandra xx
Comment Written 20-Feb-2021
reply by the author on 21-Feb-2021
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Thank you so much,Sandraxx.
Comment from LJbutterfly
This is a beautiful, well written, heart-warming story of a friend who will live in your memory forever. I enjoyed reading your well titled story with artwork that paired perfectly. I wish you the best in the contest.
reply by the author on 21-Feb-2021
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This is a beautiful, well written, heart-warming story of a friend who will live in your memory forever. I enjoyed reading your well titled story with artwork that paired perfectly. I wish you the best in the contest.
Comment Written 20-Feb-2021
reply by the author on 21-Feb-2021
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Thank you for your warm comments and your good wishes in the contest.
Comment from Lyn Peters
What a lovely tribute to your friend and the friendship you shared with your neighbor, Amanda. My heart goes out to you, and to her family, for the loss. How fortunate you were to have shared a 20 year friendship with her. Best of luck with this contest entry.
reply by the author on 20-Feb-2021
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What a lovely tribute to your friend and the friendship you shared with your neighbor, Amanda. My heart goes out to you, and to her family, for the loss. How fortunate you were to have shared a 20 year friendship with her. Best of luck with this contest entry.
Comment Written 20-Feb-2021
reply by the author on 20-Feb-2021
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Thank you for your loving and tender comments, Lynn.
Comment from Judy Lawless
What a beautiful story. It's wonderful that you had such a great friend and neighbour to continue to share life with as you aged. The most difficult part of aging is the many people we begin to lose, but we have great memories.
reply by the author on 20-Feb-2021
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What a beautiful story. It's wonderful that you had such a great friend and neighbour to continue to share life with as you aged. The most difficult part of aging is the many people we begin to lose, but we have great memories.
Comment Written 20-Feb-2021
reply by the author on 20-Feb-2021
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Thank you so much for your loving comments.
