Of This
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Comment from Begin Again
I'm a struggling writer and most definitely a struggling reader as I attempt to read and understand the mind of a poet. It often leaves me pondering phrases (bits and pieces) regardless if I understood the whole concept of the poem. You and others knock my cobwebs away and I venture to follow your imaginations. Smiles!
reply by the author on 19-Feb-2021
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I'm a struggling writer and most definitely a struggling reader as I attempt to read and understand the mind of a poet. It often leaves me pondering phrases (bits and pieces) regardless if I understood the whole concept of the poem. You and others knock my cobwebs away and I venture to follow your imaginations. Smiles!
Comment Written 19-Feb-2021
reply by the author on 19-Feb-2021
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Smiling as well, thank you.
Comment from jake cosmos aller
an interesting take on the nature of God and the universe. I like how you built the tension until the very end and the fact that it not at all clear what God you are talking about. Well done.
reply by the author on 19-Feb-2021
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an interesting take on the nature of God and the universe. I like how you built the tension until the very end and the fact that it not at all clear what God you are talking about. Well done.
Comment Written 19-Feb-2021
reply by the author on 19-Feb-2021
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Thank you.
Comment from AnnaLinda
Victor,
"As should be our nature." Yes...someday...maybe.
Your reflections with few words have a lot of depth.
"My lessons
inure me
and yet
elude as well"
Me too! You give your readers pause of thought here. Interesting use of ken and thanks for sharing.
Anna
reply by the author on 18-Feb-2021
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Victor,
"As should be our nature." Yes...someday...maybe.
Your reflections with few words have a lot of depth.
"My lessons
inure me
and yet
elude as well"
Me too! You give your readers pause of thought here. Interesting use of ken and thanks for sharing.
Anna
Comment Written 18-Feb-2021
reply by the author on 18-Feb-2021
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How wonderful it is to see a reader/reviewer resonate with what one has written. Hard to describe the "Zen-like" feeling that occurs. Thank you.
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Thank you
Comment from QC Poet
Well the Good News is they've found a few more Micro or Exo-planets within our Universe, So Hang in there. Worked a bit in Missiles and Space vehicle fabrication as well as Military Aerospace Fabrication. Excellent use of and On Point Descriptors. Thanks for Sharing this poem offering.
reply by the author on 18-Feb-2021
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Well the Good News is they've found a few more Micro or Exo-planets within our Universe, So Hang in there. Worked a bit in Missiles and Space vehicle fabrication as well as Military Aerospace Fabrication. Excellent use of and On Point Descriptors. Thanks for Sharing this poem offering.
Comment Written 18-Feb-2021
reply by the author on 18-Feb-2021
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Thank you. For your review and for your work. My daughter actually tested the software for Perserverance.
Comment from Jimmy Hogg
Enjoyed the sparse, fragmentary style of this piece. And the word 'ken' always get me excited. Had to look up 'inure'- definitely will be using that in the future.
reply by the author on 18-Feb-2021
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Enjoyed the sparse, fragmentary style of this piece. And the word 'ken' always get me excited. Had to look up 'inure'- definitely will be using that in the future.
Comment Written 18-Feb-2021
reply by the author on 18-Feb-2021
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Yes, lol, "inure" is an exceptional word. Don't know exactly where I picked it up, but when you need it, it comes to the fore.
Comment from kahpot
Wow! my understanding of this work is still a little mixed, I know it gives me some wonderful images, " and yet elude as well", I could try to explain what I read but I think this kind of wonderful poetry should be up to the individual to take what they feel, very well done and thank you for sharing****kahpot
reply by the author on 18-Feb-2021
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Wow! my understanding of this work is still a little mixed, I know it gives me some wonderful images, " and yet elude as well", I could try to explain what I read but I think this kind of wonderful poetry should be up to the individual to take what they feel, very well done and thank you for sharing****kahpot
Comment Written 18-Feb-2021
reply by the author on 18-Feb-2021
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And thank you for reading it. For an open mind, willing to sway in the breeze, fly as a kite forlorn, for no matter the end, the flight is exhilerating enough to warrant such.
Comment from duchessofdrumborg
'Of This', is an extremely well-written and spiritually-uplifting piece. It was a pleasure to both read and review this talented poet's work. I very much look forward to seeing your post.
reply by the author on 18-Feb-2021
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'Of This', is an extremely well-written and spiritually-uplifting piece. It was a pleasure to both read and review this talented poet's work. I very much look forward to seeing your post.
Comment Written 18-Feb-2021
reply by the author on 18-Feb-2021
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Thank you, my Lady.
You're welcome, kind Sir.
Comment from Stephen Allen Crow
This was truly beautiful, simple, few words, yet told a whole story. Well done Victor, keep up the amazing work, I loved it! Take care and keep writing my friend!
reply by the author on 18-Feb-2021
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This was truly beautiful, simple, few words, yet told a whole story. Well done Victor, keep up the amazing work, I loved it! Take care and keep writing my friend!
Comment Written 18-Feb-2021
reply by the author on 18-Feb-2021
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Thank you, Stephen.
Comment from karenina
Your final four lines elicit great joy in my heart. We fall so far short of the serenity of acceptance and forgiveness--even of ourselves--so often! Loved your pithy little author's comment ("just getting older")-- Fact is, as one who is in the same (aging) boat...I do believe wisdom comes with the passage of years on this confounding planet!--Karenina
reply by the author on 18-Feb-2021
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Your final four lines elicit great joy in my heart. We fall so far short of the serenity of acceptance and forgiveness--even of ourselves--so often! Loved your pithy little author's comment ("just getting older")-- Fact is, as one who is in the same (aging) boat...I do believe wisdom comes with the passage of years on this confounding planet!--Karenina
Comment Written 18-Feb-2021
reply by the author on 18-Feb-2021
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Yes, it seems so. Ha! Thank you.
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Hey, there have to be some "silver linings" to this aging process! (smile)---Karenina
Comment from Rdfrdmom2
victortouche:
As I understand it, we either get older - or we don't. And, if we don't, who's going to write this wonderful poetry in your place? So good to see you again, my friend.
Rdfrdmom2
reply by the author on 18-Feb-2021
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victortouche:
As I understand it, we either get older - or we don't. And, if we don't, who's going to write this wonderful poetry in your place? So good to see you again, my friend.
Rdfrdmom2
Comment Written 18-Feb-2021
reply by the author on 18-Feb-2021
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Well, thank you.That was very nice of you.
