Comment from Mark Schardine

Excellent

after cold weather
cherry blossoms permeate
fragrant balmy breeze

The arrival of spring involves fragrances as much as warmer temperatures, and we take a moment to appreciate them.

 Comment Written 20-Feb-2021

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reply by the author on 20-Feb-2021

Thank you very much for your review and kind words. I always appreciate you.

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Comment from karenina

Excellent

I am SO hoping this is nipping at our heels...this respite from snow and ice and storms! I'd give my eye teeth for the scent of cherry blossoms about now. New storm is just beginning as I review your elegant poem! I'm dog tired of winter.... Karenina

 Comment Written 18-Feb-2021

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reply by the author on 18-Feb-2021

Thank you very much, Karenina, I appreciate your kind review.

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Comment from Teri7

Excellent

Gypsy, This is a very beautiful and very well written 5/7/5 Renga. You used very good descriptive words and very lovely imagery. Thank you for sharing. love and blessings, Teri

 Comment Written 18-Feb-2021

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reply by the author on 18-Feb-2021

Thank you very much, Teri, you're very kind
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Comment from Gloria ....

Excellent

Another gorgeous entry into your Renga book. Fruit trees have such lovely blossoms and fill the air with colour.

A superb write, Gypsy and your presentation most artistic. :)

Gloria

 Comment Written 17-Feb-2021

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reply by the author on 17-Feb-2021

Thank you very much, Gloria, I appreciate your time and kind review.

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Comment from lyenochka

Excellent

Lovely spring poem for that hopeful smell of spring. There's something about the fruit tree blossoms that really smell of spring, giving a fragrance to the warmer breeze.

 Comment Written 17-Feb-2021

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reply by the author on 17-Feb-2021

Thank you very much, Helen, I appreciate your time and kind review.

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Comment from Jannypan (Jan)

Excellent

I enjoyed your well-written poem, Gypsy. Its presentation is beautiful. I like the color scheme, the images, and the precise word choices. I like the way you add an extra picture at the bottom of your work. I'm trying to learn how to do that, but have trouble with getting the exact url.
Respectfully, Jan

 Comment Written 17-Feb-2021

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reply by the author on 17-Feb-2021

Thank you very much, Jan, I appreciate your time and kind review.

I will send you a message with the link :)

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Comment from Supe

Excellent

This is nicely presented and I particularly like the authors notes. They are so helpful. This is a lovely 5-7-5 syllable count and sounds like quite the project. Thanks for sharing.

 Comment Written 17-Feb-2021

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reply by the author on 17-Feb-2021

Thank you very much, supe, I appreciate your time and kind review.

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