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Zoo Murder:

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Bull Schlitz has a case of murder at the zoo.

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Comment from Mistydawn
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I've heard about robberies gone wrong, but this one takes the cake, being mauled to death by a honey badger for his goods. That has to be one for the record. The way everyone is acting it makes me wonder if this wasn't some sort of set up. Planting the honey knowing what the creature would do. Why would they do that after he's dead? Revenge? Guess I better keep reading. Oh, what a hardship. Just kidding, you know I like your work.

 Comment Written 23-Feb-2021

reply by the author on 23-Feb-2021
    Hopefully it will make sense soon.
Comment from Suzanna Ray
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Dear Bill, Please don't tell me that you are bringing more complicating evidence into this case. and leaving me guessing more and more. Frankly I think this one is one of the best stories you have ever written. Keep posting.

 Comment Written 23-Feb-2021

reply by the author on 23-Feb-2021
    Thanks, Suzanna
Comment from Mastery
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Hi Bill. Your Looney Tunes are definitely in need of a shrink or shrank. Their names are compelling and they certainly are fun to watch, dialogue and all. Their zoo needs to get some hands on mental help. LOL Fun stuff, Bill. Bob

 Comment Written 23-Feb-2021

reply by the author on 23-Feb-2021
    The case will soon be solved, I guess.
Comment from Sugarray77
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Hello Bill... you have piqued my interest with the clues you left in this short verse. I really enjoyed the humorous names of your cast of characters. The repartee is good between the Dr. and Detective. Wonderful job on writing this.

Melissa

 Comment Written 23-Feb-2021

reply by the author on 23-Feb-2021
    Thanks, Melissa.
Comment from lyenochka
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He was killed by bees? Or a honey badger killed him because he had bees? Why in the world are all the possible suspects acting so guilty? I guess you'll let us know soon!

empty gurnies (gurneys)

 Comment Written 23-Feb-2021

reply by the author on 23-Feb-2021
    The wounds were postmortem.
Comment from Raffaelina Lowcock
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We started off with the Tiger being the deterrent. The suspicion is he was murdered by one of the Zoo employees and intensive interrogations have pursued. Now the ME is saying... What? Bees?

Ralf

 Comment Written 22-Feb-2021

reply by the author on 23-Feb-2021
    Just a wrinkle before the solution.
Comment from BethShelby
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Ahh.. The plot grows more complicated. This doctor seems a bit strange. I hope he wasn't eating the corpse because the names sounds like sirloin. He may be related to Ned. He could have been killed by everyone at the zoo.

 Comment Written 22-Feb-2021

reply by the author on 23-Feb-2021
    That would be too obvious, Beth.
Comment from nomi338
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Say what? Bill, you have become an expert at the unexpected development. The one thing I can always count on is that something unexpected is going to happen in your stories. Not only unexpected but bizarre as well. I have to stay on my toes when I read your posts, otherwise I will wind up lost.

 Comment Written 22-Feb-2021

reply by the author on 23-Feb-2021
    If you wind up lost, nomi, you will have plenty of people to ask directions.
reply by nomi338 on 23-Feb-2021
    Good to know, I think. LOL.