Comment from Iza Deleanu

Excellent

I hope your dream comes true:"There has to be some neutral ground
where principles prevail, abound.
Our country must again be great
America we'll celebrate!" Thank you for sharing and good luck with the contest.

 Comment Written 17-Feb-2021

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reply by the author on 17-Feb-2021

Thank you so much, Iza, for sharing my political poem. I, too, hope my American Dream comes true.

Comment from Miss Cookie Atkinson

Excellent

I love the artwork you choose to go with your poem,they are a perfect match.
You captured my attention from the first line to the last
Thank you for sharing
Stay safe be bless and stay on praying ground.
Cookie

 Comment Written 16-Feb-2021

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reply by the author on 17-Feb-2021

I am so pleased I could capture and keep your attention, Miss Cookie. Many thanks for sharing my political poem.

reply by Miss Cookie Atkinson on 17-Feb-2021

No problem, your very welcome
Cookie

Comment from Pam (respa)

Excellent

-Very nice artwork
and presentation.
-You following the directions
of the prompt very well and
in a poetic way.
-You have the right idea
in each stanza.
-We have been broken
and divided as a country,
and that needs to change
for the sake of democracy.
-A very good entry; good luck!
-Maybe you should run for office:)

 Comment Written 16-Feb-2021

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reply by the author on 16-Feb-2021

Thank you, Pam, for looking at my poem closely and your great review.

reply by Pam (respa) on 17-Feb-2021

You are very welcome. I thought it was very good.

Comment from Jannypan (Jan)

Excellent

You did a good job with the rules of this contest. Your image choice is perfect, too. Your lines read smoothly, the rhymes are good, and your message is true. Best wishes.
Respectfully, Jan

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 Comment Written 16-Feb-2021

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reply by the author on 16-Feb-2021

Thank you very much, Jan, for your review and comments.