Comment from LisaMay

Excellent

I enjoyed your evocative poem. It describes the scene very effectively - i could smell the woodsmoke and see the diamonds glittering on water and snow. The wood smoke may well be from the Swedish sauna hut.

 Comment Written 17-Feb-2021

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reply by the author on 18-Feb-2021

Thanks for the insightful review. Lots of snow, but loving it, cheers, j

Comment from moonsunrise

Excellent

I enjoyed reading this lovely poem. The image you selected is crisp and very serene and the reader can almost smell the wood smoke weaving between the snowy boughs.
Thanks for sharing.

 Comment Written 16-Feb-2021

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reply by the author on 17-Feb-2021

Thanks for the encouraging review I love the smell of woods moke and that fresh, cold air. I need an inner tube for this inner child,
a great sledding day. Cheers, j

Comment from Mrs. KT

Excellent

Hello Mystery Writer!
Exquisite imagery! Looks like our yard at the moment: dreamlike but bitterly cold.
I'll be looking for this offering in the voting booth!

Thank you for sharing!
diane

 Comment Written 16-Feb-2021

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reply by the author on 17-Feb-2021

Thanks for the encouraging review kt. I am loving all this snow but thinking spring, haha. Cheers, j

Comment from donette1914

Excellent

what a beautiful dream, diamond sequin streams
outstanding!!!
your brought this to life with well chosen words with the story line
very believable
thank you for sharing it was a pleasure
I hope for the best in the contest

 Comment Written 16-Feb-2021

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reply by the author on 17-Feb-2021

Thanks for the insightful review. It's so pretty here with the snow. On my walk there is a stream with a beautiful lacy edge. Have a great day, j