Comment from royowen

Exceptional

My elder daughter calls me soppy, and she's right, I am. And just reading this makes me glad I am, I think Jesus was "soppy" always ready and eager to render compassion, forgiveness and healing, the only requirement was faith, we need that to survive, it requires vision and hope. This is close to my heart, Jem asked permission to heal, superbly written dear Shana, as you can tell, excellent, Roy

 Comment Written 16-Feb-2021

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reply by the author on 16-Feb-2021

Thanks dear friend :)

I was ready to write this scene. It seemed to flow because I was eager to have Martha healed. I love a good story with healing and love. I'm glad you enjoyed. It gave me a good feeling to create it.

Thanks for all your support!
Always your fan,
Shana :)

reply by royowen on 16-Feb-2021

Me too sweet girl, well dine

Comment from RetroStarfish

Excellent

Great chapter and very sympathetic characters. It's hard to create such a unique alternate reality and fill it with such realistic people. Well done.
Also, I was able to easily follow the plot without having read earlier chapters.

 Comment Written 16-Feb-2021

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reply by the author on 16-Feb-2021

Thank you, RetroStarfish :)

So happy you enjoyed and it was easy for you to follow. That gives me encouragement. I do enjoy creating heartfelt scenes. They give me that good feeling.

Thanks again!
Sincerely,
Shana :)

Comment from Mistydawn

Exceptional

I was holding back my tears until I read your last sentence, then the waterworks began. I'm so glad that Amy and Martha are alright and that the Breedlines have taken them in are looking after them. This is a very well-written, emotional chapter. Your characters, their thoughts, and dialogue seem realistic. Like every week, I look forward to reading more.
Ps. Do you love this weather we're having? I feel like I live in Alaska. -3 degrees. I don't remember Missouri ever being this cold.

 Comment Written 16-Feb-2021

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reply by the author on 16-Feb-2021

Thank you so much, Mistydawn :)

I was hoping you would enjoy this one. It gave me a good feeling creating it. It takes away all the darkness in the world for a bit to write goodness. Thanks for your kind words and support. It made my day through all this crazy weather. It was -15 last night in Arkansas. The electric companies can't keep up with all the power due to the energy everyone is using and had to do a rotation shutdown. So far, it only lasted 45 minutes this morning but they are going to do it again. It is miserable. I put plastic baggies on my little dog so he could get some outdoors today. We've been inside for 3 days. Glad when it goes away. Stay warm and stay safe.

Thanks again!
Big hugs,
Shana :)

reply by Mistydawn on 17-Feb-2021

You and me both.
My dogs run out do their business, then run inside. My older dog Daisy won't venture out, she does her business off the side of the porch.

Comment from fm wright

Exceptional

I like the respite from all the evil that the covenant members have to fight and the chance for some healing. I also look forward to finding out what happens next in Martha's ans Amy's lives. The pictures, also, relate well the essence of the chapter. Thank you for further continuing to share this story.

 Comment Written 16-Feb-2021

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reply by the author on 16-Feb-2021

Thanks so much Faye :)

I was hoping you'd enjoy this one. It gave me that good feeling to create it. I hope I can keep up the entertainment in this story. I've had writers block in the last 3 days. That happens to me a lot. But I'm sure I'll get it back soon.

Thanks for all your support and awesome reviews.
Big hugs,
Shana :)

reply by fm wright on 17-Feb-2021

Here's praying your writer's block goes away. I look forward to your next posting.
Hugs,
Faye