Welcome To Our Family
A non-fiction poem.16 total reviews
Comment from Anne Johnston
Very well written to commemorate the birth of your great-granddaughter. This will be a precious entry in her baby book. I like how you have described her: "So your coming into the world brought a wonderful ray of sunshine to your family." Good choice for picture.
reply by the author on 19-Feb-2021
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Very well written to commemorate the birth of your great-granddaughter. This will be a precious entry in her baby book. I like how you have described her: "So your coming into the world brought a wonderful ray of sunshine to your family." Good choice for picture.
Comment Written 16-Feb-2021
reply by the author on 19-Feb-2021
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Thank you for your lovely review.
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You are very welcome
Comment from BethShelby
Congratulations to you on the birth of a new great grandchild. What a lovely way to welcome her into the family with a poem. I'm sure she will be happy to have this memorial of her birth as she grows older.
reply by the author on 19-Feb-2021
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Congratulations to you on the birth of a new great grandchild. What a lovely way to welcome her into the family with a poem. I'm sure she will be happy to have this memorial of her birth as she grows older.
Comment Written 16-Feb-2021
reply by the author on 19-Feb-2021
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Thank you for your lovely review.
Comment from Debra White
Congratulations, Patricia, on the birth of your Great-Granddaughter, Luella.
I love the contrast of the sunshine and the arctic weather you mention!
Best wishes, Debra :)
reply by the author on 16-Feb-2021
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Congratulations, Patricia, on the birth of your Great-Granddaughter, Luella.
I love the contrast of the sunshine and the arctic weather you mention!
Best wishes, Debra :)
Comment Written 16-Feb-2021
reply by the author on 16-Feb-2021
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Thank you for your nice review.
Comment from Katherine M. (k-11)
Patricia, you are so lucky to have your family growing, even at this difficult time. I wish you all blessings from your latest little bundle of joy. Thank you for sharing this happy event with us. Katherine xx
reply by the author on 16-Feb-2021
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Patricia, you are so lucky to have your family growing, even at this difficult time. I wish you all blessings from your latest little bundle of joy. Thank you for sharing this happy event with us. Katherine xx
Comment Written 16-Feb-2021
reply by the author on 16-Feb-2021
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Thank you for your nice review.
Comment from oliver818
This is a sweet poem, I enjoyed reading it. Kids bring light to our life and especially for grandparents. You captured that well here. Thanks for sharing this and have a great day
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reply by the author on 16-Feb-2021
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This is a sweet poem, I enjoyed reading it. Kids bring light to our life and especially for grandparents. You captured that well here. Thanks for sharing this and have a great day
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Comment Written 16-Feb-2021
reply by the author on 16-Feb-2021
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Thank you for your nice review.
Comment from jaded831
What a tribute, I could feel the love you felt for this ray of sunshine. She brought heat to warm up a cold world. You created the beautiful picture, which added io your beautiful poem. You created an experience.
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reply by the author on 16-Feb-2021
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What a tribute, I could feel the love you felt for this ray of sunshine. She brought heat to warm up a cold world. You created the beautiful picture, which added io your beautiful poem. You created an experience.
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Comment Written 16-Feb-2021
reply by the author on 16-Feb-2021
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Thank you for your nice review.
