Acrostic-Loop
An Acrostic- Loop Poem17 total reviews
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Acrostic-Loop
by kahpot
Hello, Kym,
Great Acrostic- Loop Poem... I like the acrostic poem form. I appreciate the font to show the loop. Well done. Nice presentation.
reply by the author on 16-Feb-2021
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Acrostic-Loop
by kahpot
Hello, Kym,
Great Acrostic- Loop Poem... I like the acrostic poem form. I appreciate the font to show the loop. Well done. Nice presentation.
Comment Written 16-Feb-2021
reply by the author on 16-Feb-2021
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Thank you very much, as always much appreciated****kahpot
Comment from Iza Deleanu
Nice explanation of this type of poem:"
Loop forms the connection you cannot omit
Omitt and you'll find links have no origin
Origin to end the same word for this poem
Poem that's now penned as an Acrostic-Loop" Thank you for sharing and good luck with your writings.
reply by the author on 16-Feb-2021
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Nice explanation of this type of poem:"
Loop forms the connection you cannot omit
Omitt and you'll find links have no origin
Origin to end the same word for this poem
Poem that's now penned as an Acrostic-Loop" Thank you for sharing and good luck with your writings.
Comment Written 15-Feb-2021
reply by the author on 16-Feb-2021
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Thank you for your excellent review and comments, much appreciated****kahpot
Comment from Carlos' girl
A Very clever acrostic poem which i liked very much seeing where it was going to take me. Nice job... Good luck to you with the contest and thank you and stay well
reply by the author on 16-Feb-2021
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A Very clever acrostic poem which i liked very much seeing where it was going to take me. Nice job... Good luck to you with the contest and thank you and stay well
Comment Written 15-Feb-2021
reply by the author on 16-Feb-2021
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Thank you for your wonderful review, very much appreciated****kahpot
Comment from Goodadvicechan
Nice picture. It shows deep thinking of the two boys. That means they were given a difficult problem to solve.
I can see you put a lot of effect in this poem. You deserve the credits and the rating.
Happy writing and thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 16-Feb-2021
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Nice picture. It shows deep thinking of the two boys. That means they were given a difficult problem to solve.
I can see you put a lot of effect in this poem. You deserve the credits and the rating.
Happy writing and thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 15-Feb-2021
reply by the author on 16-Feb-2021
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Thank you for this very encouraging review, much appreciated****kahpot
Comment from lyenochka
Wonderful! You have defined your special Kahpot form, the Acrostic Loop using an acrostic loop! Great job and I hope more people will try it out. I will have to give it some more thought and see if I'm brave enough to try it. Does each line have to be the same length?
One spelling comment - it may be because you are using Aussie English?
Loop forms the connection you cannot omitt (omit)
reply by the author on 16-Feb-2021
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Wonderful! You have defined your special Kahpot form, the Acrostic Loop using an acrostic loop! Great job and I hope more people will try it out. I will have to give it some more thought and see if I'm brave enough to try it. Does each line have to be the same length?
One spelling comment - it may be because you are using Aussie English?
Loop forms the connection you cannot omitt (omit)
Comment Written 15-Feb-2021
reply by the author on 16-Feb-2021
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Thank you, I have learned so much since I joined this site, syllables being the main thing for certain forms, in all honesty 3 years ago syllables were unfamiliar to me, (not much schooling), I have not used any count for this form, just tried to keep a flow and I guess rhythm going, and to make sense, as always much appreciated****kahpot
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The making sense is the hardest part and you do that so well.
Comment from Miss Cookie Atkinson
Not only did I like the artwork you chose to go with your poem, but you captured my attention from the first line to the last
I found this is different way to write a poem you did a great job
Cookie
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reply by the author on 16-Feb-2021
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Not only did I like the artwork you chose to go with your poem, but you captured my attention from the first line to the last
I found this is different way to write a poem you did a great job
Cookie
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Comment Written 15-Feb-2021
reply by the author on 16-Feb-2021
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Thank you, yes I enjoy trying different ways, much appreciated****kahpot
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Your very welcome.
Take care until next time.
Cookie
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
You did a great job explaining your unique acrostic-loop style. I enjoyed reading and reviewing it. The art choice is a good pairing, too. I like the way you formatted the lines with the bold, capital letter to start each. Your steps were easy to understand.
Thanks for sharing.
Respectfully, Jan
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reply by the author on 16-Feb-2021
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You did a great job explaining your unique acrostic-loop style. I enjoyed reading and reviewing it. The art choice is a good pairing, too. I like the way you formatted the lines with the bold, capital letter to start each. Your steps were easy to understand.
Thanks for sharing.
Respectfully, Jan
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Comment Written 15-Feb-2021
reply by the author on 16-Feb-2021
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Thank you for such an encouraging review, as always much appreciated****kahpot
