Acrostic-Loop
An Acrostic- Loop Poem17 total reviews
Comment from Jean Lutz1
I like "your way". My version is if I can convince them I will confuse them. Your words and chosen art work together to make education great again. My question is will this work for those behind plastic shields or locked down at home?
reply by the author on 22-Feb-2021
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I like "your way". My version is if I can convince them I will confuse them. Your words and chosen art work together to make education great again. My question is will this work for those behind plastic shields or locked down at home?
Comment Written 22-Feb-2021
reply by the author on 22-Feb-2021
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Confusion, I think is every where about now, for those behind masks ( been there) early on while working, convincing is in the person-if they believe so might we, much appreciated****kahpot
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I've been doing my own research into masks throughout history. Using a 1978 World Book Encyl. and the Holy Bible. I did not find "masks" in the Bible so I tried "Face Coverings". Wow. I plan to write something soon. Will probably manage to offend WHO and step on some holy toes, too.
Comment from royowen
You've done such a clever thing of adding a second option to this deftly written "looping" acrostic, that speaks ever so deftly of your undoubted poetic abilities, well done, superbly scribed, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 18-Feb-2021
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You've done such a clever thing of adding a second option to this deftly written "looping" acrostic, that speaks ever so deftly of your undoubted poetic abilities, well done, superbly scribed, blessings Roy
Comment Written 18-Feb-2021
reply by the author on 18-Feb-2021
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Thank you Roy, I tried to answer some questions here, as always very much appreciated****kahpot
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Well done
Comment from Boogienights
A tutorial in poetic form...what could be better then that? It's very clever, I'll have to check out others you have done. I actually think I may have learned something. Thanks for sharing. :)
reply by the author on 18-Feb-2021
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A tutorial in poetic form...what could be better then that? It's very clever, I'll have to check out others you have done. I actually think I may have learned something. Thanks for sharing. :)
Comment Written 18-Feb-2021
reply by the author on 18-Feb-2021
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Thank you very much, I had fun with this one and tried to answer some questions at the same time, much appreciated****kahpot
Comment from Jesse James Doty
I think I understand. This is a puzzle of sorts. The meaning comes as you lay down the words that loop to form the acrostic. What fun to finish and complete with the meaning intact. This is fun to read. I suppose you are challenging us to try it ourselves, right? An excellent challenge, my friend.
Jesse
reply by the author on 17-Feb-2021
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I think I understand. This is a puzzle of sorts. The meaning comes as you lay down the words that loop to form the acrostic. What fun to finish and complete with the meaning intact. This is fun to read. I suppose you are challenging us to try it ourselves, right? An excellent challenge, my friend.
Jesse
Comment Written 17-Feb-2021
reply by the author on 17-Feb-2021
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Hole in one Jesse, most of my acrostic-Loops are of one word -devastation, jealousy etc, they are easier to describe, just pick a word-feeling and say what it means to you, as always very much appreciated****kahpot
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So, you don't start out with an intention of meaning, you just leave it up to us to assign meaning as we so interpret. Very clever my friend!
Jesse
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Hello Jesse, I may not have explained it very well, mainly that is how I start these-with the first and last line, I do try to explain what that word means to me and hopefully others, I have nearly filled in the gaps with my attempt-will send it to you when completed****kahpot
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Great! Looking forward to it!
Jesse
Comment from Cybertron1986
Loved the connection of word play at the end of each verse. Quite a brain teaser that appealingly engages the reader in a unique and intellectual way! A very strong and creative share. Well done!
reply by the author on 16-Feb-2021
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Loved the connection of word play at the end of each verse. Quite a brain teaser that appealingly engages the reader in a unique and intellectual way! A very strong and creative share. Well done!
Comment Written 16-Feb-2021
reply by the author on 16-Feb-2021
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Wow! thank you so very much, yes the connection and the trying to make sense is quite challenging-but fun to try, your encouraging review and comments are very much appreciated****kahpot
Comment from Mastery
Good job, my friend. Did you invent this combined form of an acrostic and a loop combined? At any rate, I liked it and would read more, if you have them. Bless you, good to have you back again. Bob
reply by the author on 16-Feb-2021
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Good job, my friend. Did you invent this combined form of an acrostic and a loop combined? At any rate, I liked it and would read more, if you have them. Bless you, good to have you back again. Bob
Comment Written 16-Feb-2021
reply by the author on 16-Feb-2021
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Hello Bob, yes I think I did, and thank you it is good to be back-hopefully on a regular basis, I do have more, mainly one word titles.. hardship, devastation, etc most are on the first page of my portfolio, I will be catching with your work very soon, as always much appreciated****kahpot
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:) Bob
Comment from Susan Larson
What a feat! Writing an acrostic poem and a loop poem all in one and having it flow and make sense as as it explains itself. You might want to double check "omitt" in your last stanza
reply by the author on 16-Feb-2021
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What a feat! Writing an acrostic poem and a loop poem all in one and having it flow and make sense as as it explains itself. You might want to double check "omitt" in your last stanza
Comment Written 16-Feb-2021
reply by the author on 16-Feb-2021
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Thank you very much, yes I had a bit of fun doing this, and omit has been corrected, many thanks and much appreciated****kahpot
Comment from Joanne Gill-Maddick
This is an Awesome acrostic loop. I like this style. Very well done. Nice photo to go with your words. I like part. Origin to end the same word for this poem. Poem that's now penned as acrostic loop.
reply by the author on 16-Feb-2021
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This is an Awesome acrostic loop. I like this style. Very well done. Nice photo to go with your words. I like part. Origin to end the same word for this poem. Poem that's now penned as acrostic loop.
Comment Written 16-Feb-2021
reply by the author on 16-Feb-2021
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Thank you for your very encouraging review and comments, very much appreciated****kahpot
Comment from June Sargent
I have always admired how you could combine the rules of two different formats to create a poem that still flowed well and made sense. You have done it again! The rules are simple - but the actual application can be challenging. Thank you for sharing. I mght try my hand at it someday.
reply by the author on 16-Feb-2021
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I have always admired how you could combine the rules of two different formats to create a poem that still flowed well and made sense. You have done it again! The rules are simple - but the actual application can be challenging. Thank you for sharing. I mght try my hand at it someday.
Comment Written 16-Feb-2021
reply by the author on 16-Feb-2021
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Thank you for your excellent review and comments, as always very much appreciated****kahpot
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
Loops are not not easy and combined with a acrostic they are almost impossible! You did a great job here and we also learned how you did it, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 16-Feb-2021
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Loops are not not easy and combined with a acrostic they are almost impossible! You did a great job here and we also learned how you did it, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
Comment Written 16-Feb-2021
reply by the author on 16-Feb-2021
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Thank you very much, I had fun with this one, as always much appreciated****kahpot
