The Winter of My Heart
A Pantoum for the Pic This Challenge15 total reviews
Comment from Elizabeth Emerald
Startling imagery of greyness--stunning turn of phrase--biting unrelenting chill--elegant presentation--graceful flow--fine work in the form--thanks for detailed notes!
reply by the author on 16-Feb-2021
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Startling imagery of greyness--stunning turn of phrase--biting unrelenting chill--elegant presentation--graceful flow--fine work in the form--thanks for detailed notes!
Comment Written 15-Feb-2021
reply by the author on 16-Feb-2021
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Thank you for taking the time to share your thoughts on this pantoum. I appreciate the positive feedback. Glad you enjoyed it.
Comment from donette1914
outstanding with the winter of your heart
your brought this to life with well chosen words with the story line
very believable and the photo goes well
thank you for sharing it was a pleasure
reply by the author on 16-Feb-2021
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outstanding with the winter of your heart
your brought this to life with well chosen words with the story line
very believable and the photo goes well
thank you for sharing it was a pleasure
Comment Written 15-Feb-2021
reply by the author on 16-Feb-2021
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Thank you for taking the time to share your thoughts on this pantoum. I appreciate the positive feedback. Glad you enjoyed it.
Comment from amada
There are so many great poetic devices in your special poem here, a Pantoum. You tells it all in beautiful lines that seem to rhyme without effort! As if meant to be like that.
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reply by the author on 15-Feb-2021
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There are so many great poetic devices in your special poem here, a Pantoum. You tells it all in beautiful lines that seem to rhyme without effort! As if meant to be like that.
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Comment Written 15-Feb-2021
reply by the author on 15-Feb-2021
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Thank you for dropping by to share your insightful comments! I appreciate very much the positive feedback. Glad you enjoyed the read.
Comment from lyenochka
You did a super job with this pantoum form. (I've read these but find the form too complicated!) You told a sad and moving story that fits that picture very well!
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reply by the author on 15-Feb-2021
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You did a super job with this pantoum form. (I've read these but find the form too complicated!) You told a sad and moving story that fits that picture very well!
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Comment Written 15-Feb-2021
reply by the author on 15-Feb-2021
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Thank you for dropping by to share your insightful comments! I appreciate very much the positive feedback. Glad you enjoyed the read. And thank you for the certificate!
Comment from Irish Rain
I just SO love this!!
I love the form, and most especially
your beautiful words.
A quite stunning piece, and the
picture is so perfect!
Blessings...
reply by the author on 15-Feb-2021
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I just SO love this!!
I love the form, and most especially
your beautiful words.
A quite stunning piece, and the
picture is so perfect!
Blessings...
Comment Written 15-Feb-2021
reply by the author on 15-Feb-2021
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Thank you for dropping by to share your insightful comments! I appreciate very much the positive feedback. Glad you enjoyed the read. And thank you for the generous rating!
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Have a lovely week!!
