Daylight
Waking thoughts.45 total reviews
Comment from Gloria ....
Oh this is so beautiful Amada. Poetry that arises straight from one's environment through moments of inspiration, solace are so inspiring, and perfectly complemented with the tanka form.
So lovely and I wish you much good luck with the Contest Committee. :)
Gloria
reply by the author on 17-Feb-2021
  |
Oh this is so beautiful Amada. Poetry that arises straight from one's environment through moments of inspiration, solace are so inspiring, and perfectly complemented with the tanka form.
So lovely and I wish you much good luck with the Contest Committee. :)
Gloria
Comment Written 17-Feb-2021
reply by the author on 17-Feb-2021
-
Hi Gloria, so dear old friend, thank you for reading and commenting in this work.
Comment from Lyn Peters
What a lovely piece of work, and what a lovely notation at the end. The artwork so beautifully compliments your words. Thank you for sharing this piece, and your experience. Wishing you all the best.
reply by the author on 17-Feb-2021
|
What a lovely piece of work, and what a lovely notation at the end. The artwork so beautifully compliments your words. Thank you for sharing this piece, and your experience. Wishing you all the best.
Comment Written 17-Feb-2021
reply by the author on 17-Feb-2021
-
Thank you, Lym, your comments are so awesome!
Comment from victor 66
For some people, nature has a way of renewing their strength. I think what it amounts to, if people are open to nature, such things occur . My grandmother, when she was alive, told me when she was a child, of a thunderstorm that was happening. A fireball came towards the house, went through the screen door and then up the fireplace chimney. No one was hurt but I never heard of anyone having that experience previously. Best wishes.
reply by the author on 17-Feb-2021
|
For some people, nature has a way of renewing their strength. I think what it amounts to, if people are open to nature, such things occur . My grandmother, when she was alive, told me when she was a child, of a thunderstorm that was happening. A fireball came towards the house, went through the screen door and then up the fireplace chimney. No one was hurt but I never heard of anyone having that experience previously. Best wishes.
Comment Written 17-Feb-2021
reply by the author on 17-Feb-2021
-
Thank you for reading my work. I believe your grandmother was protected by an almighty being, dear fellow writer.
-
You are most welcome, Amada.
Comment from jenintorre
This is a very thought provoking poem. I enjoyed reading it. I especially liked 'drowsy window'. I wish you lots of luck in the competition. Best wishes. Jen.
reply by the author on 17-Feb-2021
|
This is a very thought provoking poem. I enjoyed reading it. I especially liked 'drowsy window'. I wish you lots of luck in the competition. Best wishes. Jen.
Comment Written 17-Feb-2021
reply by the author on 17-Feb-2021
-
Thank you so much for your great review.
Comment from Debbie Pope
Wow! I think that you have a winner here. I'm just out of six star ratings, Amada. I love word haunting word choices. I particularly like your third and fourth lines. That third line is a great turning line. I love that you call your sorrows dust and that you speak of bends and centers.
Well done.
reply by the author on 17-Feb-2021
|
Wow! I think that you have a winner here. I'm just out of six star ratings, Amada. I love word haunting word choices. I particularly like your third and fourth lines. That third line is a great turning line. I love that you call your sorrows dust and that you speak of bends and centers.
Well done.
Comment Written 17-Feb-2021
reply by the author on 17-Feb-2021
-
Thank you for your vote, Debbie. You understood so well my metaphors in here. Great review.
Comment from ExperiencingLiphe
I think sometimes the sunshine can be just what we need. It's been cold but it's also been sunny. I think the sun has made the cold a little more bearable. I could also be crazy for thinking that as well. I hope you're feeling better.
reply by the author on 17-Feb-2021
|
I think sometimes the sunshine can be just what we need. It's been cold but it's also been sunny. I think the sun has made the cold a little more bearable. I could also be crazy for thinking that as well. I hope you're feeling better.
Comment Written 17-Feb-2021
reply by the author on 17-Feb-2021
-
thank you for your smart and beautiful remarks, dear poet.
Comment from Teri7
This is a very interesting and very neat poem you have penned and your daylight thoughts. You used very good descriptive words and very beautiful imagery from the art work you chose. Thanks for sharing. Blessings, Teri
reply by the author on 17-Feb-2021
|
This is a very interesting and very neat poem you have penned and your daylight thoughts. You used very good descriptive words and very beautiful imagery from the art work you chose. Thanks for sharing. Blessings, Teri
Comment Written 16-Feb-2021
reply by the author on 17-Feb-2021
-
Thank you so much for your great review, Teri
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Waking thoughts.
Daylight
by amada
Hello, Amada,
Beautiful tanka that works well expressing your sad mood. I really like the imagery... from the dark of your room (and spirit) dawn's light (maybe god's light) The light mends your center. Great job. Good luck in the contest!
reply by the author on 17-Feb-2021
|
Waking thoughts.
Daylight
by amada
Hello, Amada,
Beautiful tanka that works well expressing your sad mood. I really like the imagery... from the dark of your room (and spirit) dawn's light (maybe god's light) The light mends your center. Great job. Good luck in the contest!
Comment Written 16-Feb-2021
reply by the author on 17-Feb-2021
-
Thank you so much for your great review, Gypsy.
Comment from dragonpoet
Amada,
This poem show how hope enters softly and secretly through the window into your soul. It shows that a new day can bring new life to anything and anyone.
Keep writing and stay healthy.
Joan
reply by the author on 17-Feb-2021
|
Amada,
This poem show how hope enters softly and secretly through the window into your soul. It shows that a new day can bring new life to anything and anyone.
Keep writing and stay healthy.
Joan
Comment Written 16-Feb-2021
reply by the author on 17-Feb-2021
-
Hi Joan, great to know you are dragonpoet...Ah, nice name. Thank your for reviewing my work, I do agree...so i try to concentrate in nice, good things...
-
You're welcome, amada. I am glad you like my site name.
Joan
Comment from royowen
Of course it was a sign of encouragement from God, don't ignore the signs, who else do you think gave it? This is a great revelation, and a worthwhile tanka, well done, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 17-Feb-2021
|
Of course it was a sign of encouragement from God, don't ignore the signs, who else do you think gave it? This is a great revelation, and a worthwhile tanka, well done, blessings Roy
Comment Written 16-Feb-2021
reply by the author on 17-Feb-2021
-
Thank you for your great review and your comments, dear Roy.
-
Bless you
