"Cup of Smiles"
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Comment from Possummagic
Hi, I enjoyed your poem. Your seasons are all back to front from where I live, in the beautiful Barossa Valley in South Australia. If I may be so bold, there is a typo in the third sentence ending. I think it should say "care" or similar.
Good luck - Marie
reply by the author on 14-Feb-2021
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Hi, I enjoyed your poem. Your seasons are all back to front from where I live, in the beautiful Barossa Valley in South Australia. If I may be so bold, there is a typo in the third sentence ending. I think it should say "care" or similar.
Good luck - Marie
Comment Written 13-Feb-2021
reply by the author on 14-Feb-2021
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Thanks Marie.
I corrected that sentence.
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Comment from country ranch writer
According to the ground hog sux more weeks of winter still yet to come. Mother Nature I not through with her job yrpet so you all will have to sit tight till she changes her mind and give a go ahead to the Mother Earth to start spring once more, I will pray fir you as I am in sunny Florida.
reply by the author on 14-Feb-2021
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According to the ground hog sux more weeks of winter still yet to come. Mother Nature I not through with her job yrpet so you all will have to sit tight till she changes her mind and give a go ahead to the Mother Earth to start spring once more, I will pray fir you as I am in sunny Florida.
Comment Written 13-Feb-2021
reply by the author on 14-Feb-2021
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Sunny today.
Forecast is cold and blustery wind speed out of the East 16 to18 miles an hour with a possible 18 in of snow starting in the evening hours!
Enjoy Florida you snowbird!
Thanks,
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