Nightmares
Screams in the night6 total reviews
Comment from Joanne Gill-Maddick
This is a great poem for the 1-6-1 contest. Seems I've had some scary dreams. Screams. Nicely done. Such a Freaky photo. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 15-Feb-2021
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This is a great poem for the 1-6-1 contest. Seems I've had some scary dreams. Screams. Nicely done. Such a Freaky photo. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 15-Feb-2021
reply by the author on 15-Feb-2021
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Many thanks Joanne
Comment from Rdfrdmom2
So, it would seem
what you call dreams
that cause your screams
I just might dare
to call nightmares
when asleep upstairs
forgive this nonsense, it is difficult to write a 150 character review on a very short poem. good luck in the contest
Rdfrdmom2
reply by the author on 14-Feb-2021
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So, it would seem
what you call dreams
that cause your screams
I just might dare
to call nightmares
when asleep upstairs
forgive this nonsense, it is difficult to write a 150 character review on a very short poem. good luck in the contest
Rdfrdmom2
Comment Written 13-Feb-2021
reply by the author on 14-Feb-2021
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Many thanks
Comment from Susan Newell
A worthy entry for the contest. It makes a lot of sense. Now I'll have to figure out a way to say "Well done!" with no less than one hundred fifty characters. Extremely well done! Am I there yet?
reply by the author on 13-Feb-2021
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A worthy entry for the contest. It makes a lot of sense. Now I'll have to figure out a way to say "Well done!" with no less than one hundred fifty characters. Extremely well done! Am I there yet?
Comment Written 13-Feb-2021
reply by the author on 13-Feb-2021
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You are there, what a relief. Thanks
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Whew!
Comment from LisaMay
It seems a lot of us are having scary dreams in these days of uncertainty and fear. I hope you don't wake screaming in the night like the person in the picture! I like the colour choice you've made, and white type to stand out.
reply by the author on 13-Feb-2021
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It seems a lot of us are having scary dreams in these days of uncertainty and fear. I hope you don't wake screaming in the night like the person in the picture! I like the colour choice you've made, and white type to stand out.
Comment Written 13-Feb-2021
reply by the author on 13-Feb-2021
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Thanks a lot.
Comment from jaydub99
Great tone and vibe you create with very little in terms of words. Great cadence and pop to this. You needed the illustration but your words carried the message. I liked it. Nice submission, good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 13-Feb-2021
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Great tone and vibe you create with very little in terms of words. Great cadence and pop to this. You needed the illustration but your words carried the message. I liked it. Nice submission, good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 13-Feb-2021
reply by the author on 13-Feb-2021
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Thanks for the great review
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
This is a scary presentation and scary dreams are definitely nightmares and I used have them all the time when I was younger, it was scary living at home! Ha ha ha, you made me smile here, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 13-Feb-2021
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This is a scary presentation and scary dreams are definitely nightmares and I used have them all the time when I was younger, it was scary living at home! Ha ha ha, you made me smile here, love Dolly x
Comment Written 13-Feb-2021
reply by the author on 13-Feb-2021
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Thanks Dolly. X
