Serenity
1-6-1 rhyming contest entry4 total reviews
Comment from Sally Law
A beautiful and fresh take on serenity for the 1-6-1 poetry contest, mystery poet. It stands out with a choice few in this crowd. Nicely done and uniquely illustrated. Sending you my best today as always, and best wishes for the contest
Sally Law :))
reply by the author on 16-Feb-2021
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A beautiful and fresh take on serenity for the 1-6-1 poetry contest, mystery poet. It stands out with a choice few in this crowd. Nicely done and uniquely illustrated. Sending you my best today as always, and best wishes for the contest
Sally Law :))
Comment Written 16-Feb-2021
reply by the author on 16-Feb-2021
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Thank you, Sally. Comments and review, appreciated! Hugs.
Comment from lancellot
Yes, I can understand the meaning behind these few words and syllables. But, if there is one thing that could disrupt your entry, it is the formatting. Right now it is difficult see part of the words: Weep, and Free. I suggest adding a space between the lines.
Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 13-Feb-2021
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Yes, I can understand the meaning behind these few words and syllables. But, if there is one thing that could disrupt your entry, it is the formatting. Right now it is difficult see part of the words: Weep, and Free. I suggest adding a space between the lines.
Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 13-Feb-2021
reply by the author on 13-Feb-2021
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Thank you for pointing that out. I will try to fix it. You are appreciated for your honesty and suggestion. Hugs.
Comment from rspoet
You poem is very good with three rhymes and syllables
but it cut off on the first two words and hard to read.
Excellent picture to match the poem.
Best wishes to you.
Robert
reply by the author on 13-Feb-2021
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You poem is very good with three rhymes and syllables
but it cut off on the first two words and hard to read.
Excellent picture to match the poem.
Best wishes to you.
Robert
Comment Written 13-Feb-2021
reply by the author on 13-Feb-2021
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Thank you so much for pointing that out. I'm going to try to fix it now. Hugs.
Comment from victor 66
Sometimes when we are sad, perhaps the best thing you can do, is to take a nap in a very relaxing place that brings pleasant memories to us. Good luck on the contest.
reply by the author on 13-Feb-2021
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Sometimes when we are sad, perhaps the best thing you can do, is to take a nap in a very relaxing place that brings pleasant memories to us. Good luck on the contest.
Comment Written 13-Feb-2021
reply by the author on 13-Feb-2021
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I agree. Thank you for your rating and for reading my work. It is appreciated. Hugs.
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You are most welcome and it was my pleasure.
