Kaleidoscope
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Comment from DonandVicki
A fun read and clever script. I wish there was more satirical writing on this web site. the mood in the current world and culture is way too somber. We need to break these chains of oppression.
reply by the author on 17-Feb-2021
A fun read and clever script. I wish there was more satirical writing on this web site. the mood in the current world and culture is way too somber. We need to break these chains of oppression.
Comment Written 16-Feb-2021
reply by the author on 17-Feb-2021
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Thank you:)
Comment from Seshadri_Sreenivasan
Is this part of a script? I am not able to figure out the context. Nonetheless, I enjoyed the gentle rumour in digs. The characters are shaping well and the next episode may throw more light on the scene. Thanks for sharing!
reply by the author on 14-Feb-2021
Is this part of a script? I am not able to figure out the context. Nonetheless, I enjoyed the gentle rumour in digs. The characters are shaping well and the next episode may throw more light on the scene. Thanks for sharing!
Comment Written 14-Feb-2021
reply by the author on 14-Feb-2021
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This is part of a book called kaleidoscope🤗
Comment from estory
Your having fun writing this and we 're having fun reading it. Great counterpoint dialogue, I love how you have defined these two sides of yourself and they put each other down with real snappy one liners. estory
reply by the author on 12-Feb-2021
Your having fun writing this and we 're having fun reading it. Great counterpoint dialogue, I love how you have defined these two sides of yourself and they put each other down with real snappy one liners. estory
Comment Written 12-Feb-2021
reply by the author on 12-Feb-2021
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Thank you so much:) for laughing with me.
Comment from barbara.wilkey
These past two days I've been getting an extra 2 hours of sleep due to the weather. It's even cold and icy in Texas. I can't believe it. I enjoyed reading your skit.
reply by the author on 12-Feb-2021
These past two days I've been getting an extra 2 hours of sleep due to the weather. It's even cold and icy in Texas. I can't believe it. I enjoyed reading your skit.
Comment Written 12-Feb-2021
reply by the author on 12-Feb-2021
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Thank you so much for reading it:) and having a laugh with me:)
Comment from Elizabeth Emerald
Very funny--I love the part about parading in women's attire! Sugg: specify to givethe reader a vivid image.
Or IS IT your beauty sleep
You are right [COMMA] it's my beauty sleep. You know how grumpy I am if I WAKE before noon.
reply by the author on 12-Feb-2021
Very funny--I love the part about parading in women's attire! Sugg: specify to givethe reader a vivid image.
Or IS IT your beauty sleep
You are right [COMMA] it's my beauty sleep. You know how grumpy I am if I WAKE before noon.
Comment Written 12-Feb-2021
reply by the author on 12-Feb-2021
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All done my friend :) thank you so much for waiting:)