Little Ladybug
5/6/5 Spring Haiku7 total reviews
Comment from Gloria ....
The ladybug most definitely is a tiny dancer. It's amazing how they appear so easily to cling, and yet up close and personal to them, it might require great effort.
Excellent read today and many thanks for sharing. :)
Gloria
reply by the author on 09-Feb-2021
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The ladybug most definitely is a tiny dancer. It's amazing how they appear so easily to cling, and yet up close and personal to them, it might require great effort.
Excellent read today and many thanks for sharing. :)
Gloria
Comment Written 08-Feb-2021
reply by the author on 09-Feb-2021
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Thank you, Gloria. I appreciate you taking the time to read and review my poem.
Gypsy hugs
Comment from Raul1
I have enjoyed reading your piece of poetry. A beautiful poem about a ladybug. It's beautifully written and the sentences flow with clarity. Excellent work! Thanks for sharing!
reply by the author on 08-Feb-2021
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I have enjoyed reading your piece of poetry. A beautiful poem about a ladybug. It's beautifully written and the sentences flow with clarity. Excellent work! Thanks for sharing!
Comment Written 08-Feb-2021
reply by the author on 08-Feb-2021
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Thank you
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You're welcome
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Thank you, Raul
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You're welcome
Comment from Mark D. R.
Gypsy,
Glad your ladybug did not fly away! Your post has elegant grace in your favorite writing format. You chose a nice companion art piece for your post.
I missed the class about when we no longer see the ladybugs: probably wintertime, but I trust your kigo,
Mark
reply by the author on 08-Feb-2021
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Gypsy,
Glad your ladybug did not fly away! Your post has elegant grace in your favorite writing format. You chose a nice companion art piece for your post.
I missed the class about when we no longer see the ladybugs: probably wintertime, but I trust your kigo,
Mark
Comment Written 08-Feb-2021
reply by the author on 08-Feb-2021
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Thank you very much, Mark. I am going to start a Haiku Club. I hope you join.
gypsy hugs
Comment from Carol Hillebrenner
Very sweet and a great picture with it. I do like your poetry because you keep it simple. Not convinced I like Fem, a very modern term, with such an old-fashioned bug, but it does work. Good luck with this.
reply by the author on 08-Feb-2021
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Very sweet and a great picture with it. I do like your poetry because you keep it simple. Not convinced I like Fem, a very modern term, with such an old-fashioned bug, but it does work. Good luck with this.
Comment Written 08-Feb-2021
reply by the author on 08-Feb-2021
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Thank you very much for taking the time to read and review my work. Have a nice day or night. I took your advice and changed the last line. :)
Gypsy
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I do like your second ending better.
Comment from karenina
Love the final line... Seems the universal view on ladybugs is their small and delicate. Not so! You address spring with this poem and (your trademark) perfect image--but bring it contemporary with a little women-power! --Karenina
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Love the final line... Seems the universal view on ladybugs is their small and delicate. Not so! You address spring with this poem and (your trademark) perfect image--but bring it contemporary with a little women-power! --Karenina
Comment Written 08-Feb-2021
reply by the author on 08-Feb-2021
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Thank you very much Karenina :}
Gypsy
Comment from Eternal Muse
I love ladybugs! They are such peaceful beautiful creatures. Your haiku is exquisite, the presentation and artwork are amazing, sorry, my larder of sixes is empty. Loved your satori.
This is a true expert's work, and I think I may know who the exert is (smile).
reply by the author on 08-Feb-2021
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I love ladybugs! They are such peaceful beautiful creatures. Your haiku is exquisite, the presentation and artwork are amazing, sorry, my larder of sixes is empty. Loved your satori.
This is a true expert's work, and I think I may know who the exert is (smile).
Comment Written 08-Feb-2021
reply by the author on 08-Feb-2021
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Thank you very much for taking the time to read and review my work. Have a nice day or night.
Gypsy
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I knew it was you! You have your own style which I won't confuse with anyone else on the site.
Comment from Iza Deleanu
What a wonderful picture of mother nature:) "
little ladybug
balances on green leaf --
elegant fem grace" Thank you for sharing and good luck with your writings.
reply by the author on 08-Feb-2021
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What a wonderful picture of mother nature:) "
little ladybug
balances on green leaf --
elegant fem grace" Thank you for sharing and good luck with your writings.
Comment Written 08-Feb-2021
reply by the author on 08-Feb-2021
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Thank you very much for taking the time to read and review my work. Have a nice day or night.
Gypsy
