Comment from Robert Zimmerman

Excellent

Hello Raul.

This is a conforming poem for the six line contest. I saw The original Outlander years ago but I haven't seen it sense. I wish you the best of luck in the contest.

Robert

 Comment Written 10-Feb-2021

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reply by the author on 10-Feb-2021

Thanks!

reply by Robert Zimmerman on 10-Feb-2021

You're welcome

Comment from Lyn Peters

Excellent

Ah, but your work has spoken volumes to this Outlander fan's heart. Thanks for this imaginative take on the contest prompt (your poem makes me want to switch on the TV and binge on Outlander). Best of luck in the contest. Warm regards.

 Comment Written 10-Feb-2021

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reply by the author on 10-Feb-2021

Thanks!

Comment from Boogienights

Excellent

I've been meaning to try out that show. Is it about someone caught between the past and present? It sounds good and the guy in the picture is cute. A great contest entry, best of luck. :)

 Comment Written 08-Feb-2021

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reply by the author on 08-Feb-2021

Yes, you are correct. Thank you for the five star review! Thanks for the good luck!

Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose

Excellent

Hello, anonymous,

Great entry for the
Six Line Poem writing prompt contest. Good six lines form.

The man on the cover of the movie is very handsome. I like Scottish men. ;)

Good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 08-Feb-2021

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reply by the author on 08-Feb-2021

Thanks! :)

Comment from equestrik

Excellent

I have never watched this show but have seen the ads. I can relate to the write since I am also scottish. Nice handsome face for your visual. Best to you in the contest.

 Comment Written 08-Feb-2021

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reply by the author on 08-Feb-2021

Thanks!

Comment from Bill Schott

Excellent

This six-line poem, Outlander, Scottish, has the required lines and lets the readers know about your favorite viewings and their its Scottish setting.

 Comment Written 08-Feb-2021

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reply by the author on 08-Feb-2021

Thanks!

Comment from Y. M. Roger

Excellent

Yes, anyone who's seen at least one episode would ne'er call it 'light'... ;) ;) Such a fun offering for this limited length contest -- thanx so much for sharing and best of luck to you at the polls! ;)

 Comment Written 08-Feb-2021

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reply by the author on 08-Feb-2021

Thanks!

Comment from lancellot

Excellent

Very interesting. I have heard of the show but I have not seen it. Maybe I will. Anyway, I would suggest looking closer at this line:

I've mistaken you as a new British,

- it seems off. A new Brit or a new British subject. I know you want to rhyme but the grammar seems fuzzy.

 Comment Written 08-Feb-2021

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reply by the author on 08-Feb-2021

Thanks!

Comment from Susan X Smith

Excellent

I am American and have never watched the above show. I visited Scotland last year, absolutely loved it, and was glad that my DNA sample showed me to be 19% Scottish. Thanks for sharing this short and sweet poem. It meets the contest requirements.

 Comment Written 08-Feb-2021

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reply by the author on 08-Feb-2021

Thanks!

Comment from Hannah Baller

Good

This is a fun piece and 6 line poetry is tricky to write so thank you for putting this out there! Just a note that 'Outlander' is misspelt: 'Oulander'. :)

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 Comment Written 08-Feb-2021

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reply by the author on 08-Feb-2021

Thanks! I have fixed the mistake. You can check it out again.