Comment from Bill Schott

Excellent

This six-line poem, The Signs Are Clear, has the required lines and seems to show the signs of a weakening resolve to press on with loss being too great.

 Comment Written 08-Feb-2021

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reply by the author on 09-Feb-2021

Thanks, dear Bill for reading and dropping a review.

Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose

Excellent

Hello, anonymous,

Great entry for the
Six Line Poem writing prompt contest. Good six lines form.

We live through difficult times with our relationships. Hope helps a lot.

Good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 08-Feb-2021

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reply by the author on 08-Feb-2021

Thanks so much, dear Gypsy for your review and kind comments. Lol!

Comment from Y. M. Roger

Excellent

Wow, a very emotional offering here with the edges of broken heart still very jagged indeed... Although there is a mixture of rhyme and not, it is still a very intriguing offering... thanx so much for sharing and best of luck to you at the polls! ;)

 Comment Written 08-Feb-2021

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reply by the author on 08-Feb-2021

Thanks so much for your review and kind comments. Lol!

Comment from Eternal Muse

Excellent

A nice optimistic poem showing a person's realization that there is no more need to despair over the loss of someone; determination to break free from emotional chains, the challenge to replace grief with smiles and hope.

Very well written, good imagery and visuals - you brought out well that there IS hope for those who are emotionally struck by failed relationships - challenge is to engage your will power and strength.

Nicely written - good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 07-Feb-2021

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reply by the author on 08-Feb-2021

Thanks so much for the great review and motivating comments. Lol!

Comment from Iza Deleanu

Excellent

Your poem cries sadness, discretion, and desperation. Now we look through the window and wait for better days of freedom. Thank you for sharing and good luck with your writings and with the contest.

 Comment Written 07-Feb-2021

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reply by the author on 08-Feb-2021

Thanks so much Iza for the great review. Lol!

Comment from JessyCee

Excellent

I do like this, however the first line throws me off a bit, doesn't flow as nicely as the rest to me. I feel like it could use some changes in vocabulary used. Otherwise, bravo.

 Comment Written 07-Feb-2021

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reply by the author on 08-Feb-2021

Thanks so much for reading and providing a great review. Your feedback is well taken and appreciated.

reply by the author on 08-Feb-2021

I just made some rearrangement of line 1 as suggested. Could you please take a look? Thanks

reply by JessyCee on 08-Feb-2021

Hi there,

I think that flows much better! :)

Comment from donette1914

Excellent

very heartfelt and emotional on hope
very interesting piece with a wonderful photo to go with your work
your words are so smooth and very well chosen words to make this come to life
your an amazing writer and you really make ones think and believable poem
I hope for the best in the contest

 Comment Written 07-Feb-2021

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reply by the author on 08-Feb-2021

Thanks so much for the great review. Well appreciated. Lol!

Comment from CA Keller

Excellent

Such a sad poem...but as the image shows, still hopeful in nature. If this about you, all the best to you in your life pursuits. This poem will resonate with many after this last year, so many revelations is so many relationships. The best of luck to you in this contest!

 Comment Written 07-Feb-2021

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reply by the author on 07-Feb-2021

Thanks you so much dear Cynthia for the review and good wishes. Lol!

Comment from LeftHandedScribe

Excellent

This is a clear and simple approach which works because it hinges on the question of when we give up hope. There is a resignation that is sad but so relatable to how we feel when all seems dark.

 Comment Written 07-Feb-2021

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reply by the author on 07-Feb-2021

Thanks for your kind review. I value your time and feedback. Lol!