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Comment from barbara.wilkey
Oh my Goodness!! This is one of your best Dispute writings. They are all good but this one is really good. I couldn't help but laugh out loud. Thank you for sharing.
reply by the author on 08-Feb-2021
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Oh my Goodness!! This is one of your best Dispute writings. They are all good but this one is really good. I couldn't help but laugh out loud. Thank you for sharing.
Comment Written 06-Feb-2021
reply by the author on 08-Feb-2021
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Thank you so much for this stellar review you made my heart sing:)
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
Haha, what a fun script, Iza. I enjoyed reading it and could understand most of the Spanish since I live in an area where Spanish is spoken everywhere it seems. You did a good job with your characters. Your lines flow smoothly with great details and fun interactions.
Thanks for haring.
Respectfully, Jan
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Haha, what a fun script, Iza. I enjoyed reading it and could understand most of the Spanish since I live in an area where Spanish is spoken everywhere it seems. You did a good job with your characters. Your lines flow smoothly with great details and fun interactions.
Thanks for haring.
Respectfully, Jan
Comment Written 05-Feb-2021
Comment from estory
I thought this was great. You started off with a bang, the two sides of yourself arguing about language and of course the evil me is always trying to work some kind of scam and duck out of work to drink a martini. The part about the Statue of Liberty was funny. Nice job with the counterpunching dialogue and plenty of personality in these two characters. estory
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I thought this was great. You started off with a bang, the two sides of yourself arguing about language and of course the evil me is always trying to work some kind of scam and duck out of work to drink a martini. The part about the Statue of Liberty was funny. Nice job with the counterpunching dialogue and plenty of personality in these two characters. estory
Comment Written 05-Feb-2021
Comment from royowen
Another good write in this marvellous little play script you've dreamt up with "Evil me" and just plain old "Me", great job dear Iza, well done, blessings Roy
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Another good write in this marvellous little play script you've dreamt up with "Evil me" and just plain old "Me", great job dear Iza, well done, blessings Roy
Comment Written 05-Feb-2021
Comment from nova2
I think this was a beautiful script. I believe that it shows how one side of the brain is completely optimistic about the future, compared to the other is awfully pessimistic.
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I think this was a beautiful script. I believe that it shows how one side of the brain is completely optimistic about the future, compared to the other is awfully pessimistic.
Comment Written 05-Feb-2021
Comment from lyenochka
Hahaha! I loved the hot water for the brave chicken comment. Hooray! ME is hired for an interesting commercial part. I can see that this could lead to something. Interesting that he is chosen to be Madame La Liberté and not a woman.
reply by the author on 05-Feb-2021
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Hahaha! I loved the hot water for the brave chicken comment. Hooray! ME is hired for an interesting commercial part. I can see that this could lead to something. Interesting that he is chosen to be Madame La Liberté and not a woman.
Comment Written 04-Feb-2021
reply by the author on 05-Feb-2021
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Yup he needs to be the Statue of Liberty:) quite an improvement after Ophelia.
Comment from Elizabeth Emerald
Very amusing--this pair never lets up with the zingers--clever ending--I can picture you hiding under his drapes, coaching his performance! (Are you both guys?)
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Very amusing--this pair never lets up with the zingers--clever ending--I can picture you hiding under his drapes, coaching his performance! (Are you both guys?)
Comment Written 04-Feb-2021
Comment from Lyn Peters
Your entries are so enjoyable to read Iza. Dispute 14 one held my interest to the end...(and I got to work through pronouncing words in a language I don't speak - it added interest) nicely done. Wishing you all the best.
reply by the author on 04-Feb-2021
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Your entries are so enjoyable to read Iza. Dispute 14 one held my interest to the end...(and I got to work through pronouncing words in a language I don't speak - it added interest) nicely done. Wishing you all the best.
Comment Written 04-Feb-2021
reply by the author on 04-Feb-2021
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Thank you so much for your awesome support with this littles script. If you really want to learn how to write one, I think judiverse has the best on this site:)
Comment from Sharon Nolen
Interesting script. I must learn to write a script. Perhaps I'll use yours as an example.
Observation. For the following sentences:
"Evil Me: You want hot water for the brave chicken? Why? Did you got a job at a Vietnamese restaurant, and now you want to serve a chicken Pho?", I'd like to point out the use of the word "got". Did you mean "get"?
Also, I'm curious. Did your first sentence in this section translate what was said in the previous section?" If so, that is really cool.
Finally, what is a chicken Pho?
Keep up the good work.
reply by the author on 04-Feb-2021
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Interesting script. I must learn to write a script. Perhaps I'll use yours as an example.
Observation. For the following sentences:
"Evil Me: You want hot water for the brave chicken? Why? Did you got a job at a Vietnamese restaurant, and now you want to serve a chicken Pho?", I'd like to point out the use of the word "got". Did you mean "get"?
Also, I'm curious. Did your first sentence in this section translate what was said in the previous section?" If so, that is really cool.
Finally, what is a chicken Pho?
Keep up the good work.
Comment Written 04-Feb-2021
reply by the author on 04-Feb-2021
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Yes you got it right that is the translation, Pho is soup, if you taste the chicken one it really tastes like a boiled chicken:) and it still smells like it:)
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Well, great job on your story.
