Trish
Aphrodite's daughter28 total reviews
Comment from Begin Again
You've bared your soul and let your passion and love flow freely. Whether it's a remembrance or an ongoing love, it's evident that she holds a place of honor in your heart. Beautifully shared with the reader. Smiles to you!
reply by the author on 07-Feb-2021
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You've bared your soul and let your passion and love flow freely. Whether it's a remembrance or an ongoing love, it's evident that she holds a place of honor in your heart. Beautifully shared with the reader. Smiles to you!
Comment Written 07-Feb-2021
reply by the author on 07-Feb-2021
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Thank you Begin, I appreciate your comments.
Best
John
Comment from lancellot
This is so heart felt and emotional. It is what its like when love has hit you with the force of a truck and you feel it in your bones for the rest of you life
That's what this says.
reply by the author on 07-Feb-2021
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This is so heart felt and emotional. It is what its like when love has hit you with the force of a truck and you feel it in your bones for the rest of you life
That's what this says.
Comment Written 06-Feb-2021
reply by the author on 07-Feb-2021
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Than you Lance. I did try to capture and project the love and devotion that the unnamed admirer has for the love of his life.
Best
John
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Aphrodite's daughter
Trish
by Lordinajamjar
Hello, Lord,
(Love your pen name)
Beautiful and romantic poem about your love. The picture looks real..it may be your wife. She is beautiful and I can see why you would be so taken by her.
Well done.
reply by the author on 07-Feb-2021
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Aphrodite's daughter
Trish
by Lordinajamjar
Hello, Lord,
(Love your pen name)
Beautiful and romantic poem about your love. The picture looks real..it may be your wife. She is beautiful and I can see why you would be so taken by her.
Well done.
Comment Written 06-Feb-2021
reply by the author on 07-Feb-2021
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Thank you Gypsy, yes the picture is real.
Thank you I am glad that my words touched you.
Best
John
Comment from LeftHandedScribe
This is a touching and vibrant poem of love towards someone who means the world to you. It's personal yet also poetic in your description and imagery.
reply by the author on 07-Feb-2021
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This is a touching and vibrant poem of love towards someone who means the world to you. It's personal yet also poetic in your description and imagery.
Comment Written 06-Feb-2021
reply by the author on 07-Feb-2021
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Thank you Scribe.
I am happy that my words reached out to you.
Best
John
Comment from Suzanna Ray
Dear lordinajamjar, This poem is truly a flight of romantic fancy. Despite the white hair, there still must be fire in the furnace for you to be writing a poem like this.
Do keep me posted regarding your romance with Trish.
reply by the author on 07-Feb-2021
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Dear lordinajamjar, This poem is truly a flight of romantic fancy. Despite the white hair, there still must be fire in the furnace for you to be writing a poem like this.
Do keep me posted regarding your romance with Trish.
Comment Written 06-Feb-2021
reply by the author on 07-Feb-2021
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Hahaha, thank you Suzanna.
Yes, there is still some kindling left smoldering in the old furnace yet. I sense your fire is also still lit. Lol
I am glad you enjoyed this little love poem.
Best
John
Comment from Pam (respa)
-Very nice image, John.
-You wrote a very good
poem about her, too.
-Very good description of her beauty,
and her qualities that mesmerized you.
-It sounds like you are reminiscing
about her and missing the things
that you loved about her.
-Thanks for sharing it.
reply by the author on 07-Feb-2021
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-Very nice image, John.
-You wrote a very good
poem about her, too.
-Very good description of her beauty,
and her qualities that mesmerized you.
-It sounds like you are reminiscing
about her and missing the things
that you loved about her.
-Thanks for sharing it.
Comment Written 06-Feb-2021
reply by the author on 07-Feb-2021
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Pam, thank you so much for your well constructed thoughts on this romantic offering.
The unnamed admirer is certainly recounting his memory of his first encounter with the lady and the impact it had on him. I tried to deliver his words in the form of a Romeo speaking of his Juliet. Not attempting to imitate Shakespeare but trying to capture the essence of love and devotion that the bard was so brilliant at capturing and delivering to his readers
I am glad you liked it.
Best
John
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You are very welcome, John, and you did a good job of capturing the romance in the poem. The bard would be pleased. Thanks for sharing your reply.
Comment from RGstar
Lovely. From the heart, you made it simple and pure, and is felt. That is the difference in saying nice things and meaning them.
I am not sure who this is, but I know she means the world to you.
Almost effortless, it breezes through the sentiments.
Well done.
Best wishes.
RGstar
reply by the author on 07-Feb-2021
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Lovely. From the heart, you made it simple and pure, and is felt. That is the difference in saying nice things and meaning them.
I am not sure who this is, but I know she means the world to you.
Almost effortless, it breezes through the sentiments.
Well done.
Best wishes.
RGstar
Comment Written 06-Feb-2021
reply by the author on 07-Feb-2021
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Thank you RG,
I am delighted that you enjoyed this offering and especially with your comment "Almost effortless, it breezes through the sentiments."
All the best
John
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Best wishes John...have a great week
Comment from 4theloveoftrees
A beautiful sentiment to someone very special I presume! I love the imagery in this line "Soft melodies attached themselves to every sweet syllable", it's lovely. Thanks so much for sharing.
reply by the author on 07-Feb-2021
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A beautiful sentiment to someone very special I presume! I love the imagery in this line "Soft melodies attached themselves to every sweet syllable", it's lovely. Thanks so much for sharing.
Comment Written 06-Feb-2021
reply by the author on 07-Feb-2021
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Thank you, Lover of Trees, I do appreciate your wonder supportive comments.
Best
John
Comment from Seshadri_Sreenivasan
What a wonderful poem on love and passion. Very impressive use of words and feelings. There is also passion which is an energizer. Thanks for sharing!
reply by the author on 08-Feb-2021
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What a wonderful poem on love and passion. Very impressive use of words and feelings. There is also passion which is an energizer. Thanks for sharing!
Comment Written 06-Feb-2021
reply by the author on 08-Feb-2021
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Thank you Serenity, I appreciate your generous review of my little offering.
Your support is greatly appreciated.
Best
John
Comment from Goodadvicechan
To me, it is a poem of love. Every sentence in the poem is full of romance.
Such as:
"A vision of beauty that has no equal."
"Joy resounded throughout my whole being."
"I could just hear her utter but a sigh."
reply by the author on 08-Feb-2021
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To me, it is a poem of love. Every sentence in the poem is full of romance.
Such as:
"A vision of beauty that has no equal."
"Joy resounded throughout my whole being."
"I could just hear her utter but a sigh."
Comment Written 06-Feb-2021
reply by the author on 08-Feb-2021
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Thank you Goody,
I am delighted that you enjoyed this little offering.
Best
John
