Infinite Connection
Naani to all I love and miss.2 total reviews
Comment from Pam (respa)
-Nice artwork and
presentation.
-You have written a good
poem with the correct
syllable count and good topic.
-Effective use of descriptive detail.
-I like the musical references
and the concluding line.
-A good entry; good luck.
-One small thing: infinite
reply by the author on 02-Feb-2021
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-Nice artwork and
presentation.
-You have written a good
poem with the correct
syllable count and good topic.
-Effective use of descriptive detail.
-I like the musical references
and the concluding line.
-A good entry; good luck.
-One small thing: infinite
Comment Written 02-Feb-2021
reply by the author on 02-Feb-2021
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Thank you so much for catching that typo! Thank you also for your review and rating. It is appreciated. Hugs.
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You are very welcome on all counts.
Comment from rspoet
You've written a wonderful naani poem for the contest
with excellent use of alliteration.
We are connected in so many subtle ways
that transcend distance and space.
Beautiful art work to match
Well done.
Perhaps you want "Infinite" in the title.
Best wishes.
Robert
reply by the author on 02-Feb-2021
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You've written a wonderful naani poem for the contest
with excellent use of alliteration.
We are connected in so many subtle ways
that transcend distance and space.
Beautiful art work to match
Well done.
Perhaps you want "Infinite" in the title.
Best wishes.
Robert
Comment Written 02-Feb-2021
reply by the author on 02-Feb-2021
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Yes, you are correct. Thank you for catching that typo. Thank you also for your kind and thoughtful review. Hugs.
