Comment from Mistydawn

Exceptional

What a warm, heartfelt chapter. I could feel the family love, their bond. I have a feeling Jace will make an excellent father someday. I'm so glad they decided to help Martha with her cancer, poor Amy has had enough loss in her life and sure doesn't need another. Your pictures of the children are adorable. Are they yours?

 Comment Written 03-Feb-2021

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reply by the author on 04-Feb-2021

Thank you, Mistydawn :)

Glad you liked the chapter so well. I really enjoy writing about my Breedline kiddos and sharing them with everyone. Evie came into the mix in book five. Actually, Jace has twin boys, Jax and little Jem. He named his first born after his twin brother, Jem.
The kiddos in the photos are not mine. I thought they described Evie as I see her in my mind.
Stay tuned my friend... there will be more on Amy and Martha.

Thanks again for all your awesome reviews and encouraging support!

Big hugs,
Shana :)

Comment from Gert sherwood

Excellent

scongrove
This chapter in your book THE CURSE
of Father's Love has many characters your novel. The character that I like the most is Jace. Why he has a way of showing his love to the girls.
Gert

 Comment Written 02-Feb-2021

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reply by the author on 03-Feb-2021

Thanks so much, Gert :)

I appreciate your generous review and kind words. Jace is one of my favorites too! He does have a way with the girls, even the little ones. LOL! I think it's his big fun personality that draws them in.

Stay safe & thanks again!
Sincerely,
Shana :)

reply by Gert sherwood on 03-Feb-2021

You are most welcome
scongrove

Comment from royowen

Exceptional

How can one not be captive to the love that one feels for a child, particularly for one's own, I adored/adore my girls, growing up, and now I still adore, although the dynamics have shifted as adults, (I have been that same tickle monster, both with my own, now with the grands) I love the fact that the covenant is subservient to one another, as it should be. Hope they can heal Martha, as in Amy. Beautifully written dear girl, an excellent episode, great writing Shana, well done, blessings Roy

 Comment Written 02-Feb-2021

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reply by the author on 02-Feb-2021

Thanks so much, Roy :)

I'm so blessed to have you take time out of your day to read my chapters. Your advice and support is very precious. I was hoping you'd like this one. I know how much family means to you. All the little ones in the Covenant are so much fun to create and write about.

Always your fan,
Shana :)

reply by royowen on 03-Feb-2021

Thay are dear girl, brilliantly done.

Comment from Omar sb

Excellent

I've always had a fascination with stories pertaining to Wolves or mystical Werewolves.
"A Father's Love" exemplified clearly Jem's affection towards his daughter Evie.
Thank you for sharing this intriguingly/ interesting chapter of "The Curse"
Also, very well crafted description of the characters as a reference for new readers like me.
I would have been lost without it!
Looking forward to finding an opportunity to read more.

 Comment Written 02-Feb-2021

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reply by the author on 02-Feb-2021

Thank you, Omar :)

I appreciate your review and kind words. My Breedline adventures are so much fun to write about. This one is the sixth in the series. So glad the reference helped you. Hope to hear from you again.

Thanks again!
Sincerely,
Shana :)

Comment from lancellot

Excellent

This is well written chapter. I didn't see an obvious things that needed editing. I think you did well, in conveying how speaking over hard topics with family can provide a sense of calmness and reassurance.


Well done.

 Comment Written 02-Feb-2021

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reply by the author on 02-Feb-2021

Thank you, Lancellot :)

Glad you liked the chapter. I do enjoy writing about the kiddos in my series. It's fun to share with others too!

Thanks again!
Sincerely,
Shana :)

Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear

Excellent

This Chapter of the Fiction speaks taletelling about a father's love with progressive plot development supported by ample, huge dialogues realistic, and ends with a resolved ending; well said, well done; thanks for sharing this. ALCREATOR

 Comment Written 02-Feb-2021

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reply by the author on 02-Feb-2021

Thank you, Alcreator :)

Glad to hear from you again my friend! Your reviews are very helpful and I enjoy your feedback.

Thanks again!
Sincerely,
Shana :)

Comment from Old Soldier

Exceptional

A very interesting read. I enjoyed it. Thanks for the charter background at the end. My first read of this and it helped. A real page turner. Thanks for sharing and keep reading writing and reviewing.

 Comment Written 02-Feb-2021

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reply by the author on 02-Feb-2021

Thank you, Old Soldier :)

I appreciate your kind words and great review. It means a lot to me to hear from new readers and that my chapter was enjoying. Hope to hear from you again!

Thanks again!
Sincerely,
Shana :)

Comment from fm wright

Exceptional

I like how you have interwoven a mystery with a lighter scene involving love and family. The storyline seems to be coming together quite well. The pictures are absolutely beautiful. Thanks for sharing this wonderful chapter.

 Comment Written 02-Feb-2021

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reply by the author on 02-Feb-2021

Thanks so much my friend :)

I'm so happy you enjoyed this one. I was hoping everyone would like little Evie. I do have fun creating all my Breedline family. I appreciate your time and support. I always look forward to hearing what you think. Coming from a talented writer as you are, it's a big deal to me.

Big hugs!
Shana :)

reply by fm wright on 02-Feb-2021

Your welcome. However your praise makes me blush.
Hugs,
Faye