Better Weather
p[cture this challenge-Adversity24 total reviews
Comment from royowen
It will certainly be very nice to enjoy the relative peace of people behaving normally again, they (the general public) seem to be rattled by the Covid menace, beautifully written my friend, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 06-Apr-2021
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It will certainly be very nice to enjoy the relative peace of people behaving normally again, they (the general public) seem to be rattled by the Covid menace, beautifully written my friend, blessings Roy
Comment Written 06-Apr-2021
reply by the author on 06-Apr-2021
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Thanks for your continued support, Roy. I appreciate it very much.
Joan
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Most welcome
Comment from Joanne Gill-Maddick
Nicely written poem for adversity event picture this. Let us no longer hide behind masks. Ask what comes next but only bask. In being together enjoying freely the sunny summer weather. Well done.
reply by the author on 06-Apr-2021
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Nicely written poem for adversity event picture this. Let us no longer hide behind masks. Ask what comes next but only bask. In being together enjoying freely the sunny summer weather. Well done.
Comment Written 06-Apr-2021
reply by the author on 06-Apr-2021
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Thanks for the kind comments and generous rating.
Joan
Comment from Anne Johnston
Your poem expresses what we are all wishing for, that the better weather will bring an end to this virus that has been sweeping our land for the past year. It will be nice when we can enjoy the things we have been missing.
reply by the author on 05-Apr-2021
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Your poem expresses what we are all wishing for, that the better weather will bring an end to this virus that has been sweeping our land for the past year. It will be nice when we can enjoy the things we have been missing.
Comment Written 04-Apr-2021
reply by the author on 05-Apr-2021
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Thanks for reading and reviewing my poem. Glad you liked it.
dp
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You are welcome
Comment from Sharon Davis
A hopeful piece that paints a vivid picture of leaving behind the struggle and breaking free to overcome the restrictions of the past year or so. The artwork accompanying the poem is well chosen to enhance the theme. Nicely done.
reply by the author on 05-Apr-2021
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A hopeful piece that paints a vivid picture of leaving behind the struggle and breaking free to overcome the restrictions of the past year or so. The artwork accompanying the poem is well chosen to enhance the theme. Nicely done.
Comment Written 04-Apr-2021
reply by the author on 05-Apr-2021
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Thanks for reading and reviewing. I am glad you liked the artwork.
dp
Comment from AnnaLinda
Hello,
Well, I guess we can all hope. I think you have done a very
excellent job on composing your contribution poem. Free
form with nice rhymes...against all odds...Hope.
We might have to do this alone...but, nice thoughts:
"In being together
Enjoying freely the
sunny summer weather."
Anna
reply by the author on 05-Apr-2021
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Hello,
Well, I guess we can all hope. I think you have done a very
excellent job on composing your contribution poem. Free
form with nice rhymes...against all odds...Hope.
We might have to do this alone...but, nice thoughts:
"In being together
Enjoying freely the
sunny summer weather."
Anna
Comment Written 04-Apr-2021
reply by the author on 05-Apr-2021
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I guess enjoying the Spring and Summer weather depends of where you live and whether you are vaccinated or not.
Thanks for your review, Anna.
Joan
Comment from harmony13
This poem has a great message! The author's words are clear, made me
smile and are creative. I really liked how the title of this poem addressed
the current mental and emotional state of the country! The poem flows
and connects well. The artwork is great and compliments these words.
Happy Easter!
reply by the author on 05-Apr-2021
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This poem has a great message! The author's words are clear, made me
smile and are creative. I really liked how the title of this poem addressed
the current mental and emotional state of the country! The poem flows
and connects well. The artwork is great and compliments these words.
Happy Easter!
Comment Written 04-Apr-2021
reply by the author on 05-Apr-2021
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Thanks for reading and reviewing. I am glad thought it clear and creative.
Hope you had a Happy Easter too.
dp
Comment from Boogienights
Amen! You have the right idea, I think this will happen now that vaccines are ramping up. I've had my first one and all my young adult children are scheduled. Yay! Thanks for sharing this positive piece. :)
reply by the author on 04-Apr-2021
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Amen! You have the right idea, I think this will happen now that vaccines are ramping up. I've had my first one and all my young adult children are scheduled. Yay! Thanks for sharing this positive piece. :)
Comment Written 04-Apr-2021
reply by the author on 04-Apr-2021
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I appreciate the review. Yay for you and your family. My whole family have had their first dose of the Pfizer vaccine also and by April 19 will have had our second dose, Thank God.
dp
Comment from Patty Palmer
Amen! I hope right along with you that with the weather hopefully going to get nice and having had the vaccine that we can finally take off the uncomfortable masks and be able to hug a friend again. Have a great Easter Sunday!
Patty
reply by the author on 04-Apr-2021
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Amen! I hope right along with you that with the weather hopefully going to get nice and having had the vaccine that we can finally take off the uncomfortable masks and be able to hug a friend again. Have a great Easter Sunday!
Patty
Comment Written 04-Apr-2021
reply by the author on 04-Apr-2021
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Thanks for reading and reviewing. I am glad you liked it
Joan
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You're welcome
Patty
Comment from Pam (respa)
-You wrote a good
poem for the challenge, Joan.
-Good examples and rhyme.
-I like the rhyme of all of
the -ness words in the beginning.
-It creates a good rhythm.
-Let's hope we do enjoy
the summer weather, and
spring, too!
reply by the author on 04-Apr-2021
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-You wrote a good
poem for the challenge, Joan.
-Good examples and rhyme.
-I like the rhyme of all of
the -ness words in the beginning.
-It creates a good rhythm.
-Let's hope we do enjoy
the summer weather, and
spring, too!
Comment Written 04-Apr-2021
reply by the author on 04-Apr-2021
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Thanks for the thorough review and the generous rating, Pam.
Joan
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You are very welcome, Joan.
Comment from jenintorre
I really enjoyed reading this poem and found your double meanining very cleverly put. You have stressed what we are all feeling at this unbeleivable time. Take care. Jen.
reply by the author on 04-Apr-2021
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I really enjoyed reading this poem and found your double meanining very cleverly put. You have stressed what we are all feeling at this unbeleivable time. Take care. Jen.
Comment Written 04-Apr-2021
reply by the author on 04-Apr-2021
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Thanks, Jen, for your insightful and encouraging review.
Joan
