Pantygynt Poetry Poem: Wings
A poem for Jannypans Poerty potlatch Club Challenge16 total reviews
Comment from Pearl Edwards
I did read your pantygynt Poem Chrissy and I enjoyed soaring through the sky with you in your dreams. Your words gave the feel of freedom, then plop you're back in bed again. Nicely done
cheers.
reply by the author on 24-Mar-2021
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I did read your pantygynt Poem Chrissy and I enjoyed soaring through the sky with you in your dreams. Your words gave the feel of freedom, then plop you're back in bed again. Nicely done
cheers.
Comment Written 24-Mar-2021
reply by the author on 24-Mar-2021
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Hi Valda Thanks for reading and reviewing my pantygynt I enjoyed this challenge and still back in bed ha ha
Cheers Chris
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
A poem for Jannypans Poerty potlatch Club Challenge
Pantygynt Poetry Poem: Wings
by Chrissy710
Hello, Chrissy,
Great entry for the Club potlatch challenge using a pantygent poem.
Dreams are a good topic to write about. You used very descriptive words and followed the rules of the form. Well done!
reply by the author on 03-Feb-2021
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A poem for Jannypans Poerty potlatch Club Challenge
Pantygynt Poetry Poem: Wings
by Chrissy710
Hello, Chrissy,
Great entry for the Club potlatch challenge using a pantygent poem.
Dreams are a good topic to write about. You used very descriptive words and followed the rules of the form. Well done!
Comment Written 02-Feb-2021
reply by the author on 03-Feb-2021
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Thank you Gypsy It was a good style to gave a go at and fun to create the dream Thanks for your review
With Cheers Chris
Comment from Eternal Muse
I love the Pantygynt form - and I like that rhyming scheme.
Your poem floats very well, has some great descriptive imagery and visuals. I like the touch of fantasy and here her magic flight:
And without fear I soared so high
went up and down around the sky,
how wonderful it was to fly
with vision sharp my sight.
Great response to the challenge. I am intrigued by this form, have to try one myself.
reply by the author on 02-Feb-2021
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I love the Pantygynt form - and I like that rhyming scheme.
Your poem floats very well, has some great descriptive imagery and visuals. I like the touch of fantasy and here her magic flight:
And without fear I soared so high
went up and down around the sky,
how wonderful it was to fly
with vision sharp my sight.
Great response to the challenge. I am intrigued by this form, have to try one myself.
Comment Written 02-Feb-2021
reply by the author on 02-Feb-2021
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Hi Eternal Muse Thank you for your review and wonderful six stars Made my day so many Cheers
Yes I enjoyed the meter and rhyme with this pantygynt style and so pleased you think I did it justice I enjoyed writing this
Cheers Christine
Comment from aryr
As far as I am concerned, and I openly admit to not being a poet, this was great. I enjoyed the concept you chose as a dream and the picture was amazing. I liked that you presented a great rhyme. So many people were involved indirectly and you mentioned them all. Well done, Christine.
reply by the author on 02-Feb-2021
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As far as I am concerned, and I openly admit to not being a poet, this was great. I enjoyed the concept you chose as a dream and the picture was amazing. I liked that you presented a great rhyme. So many people were involved indirectly and you mentioned them all. Well done, Christine.
Comment Written 01-Feb-2021
reply by the author on 02-Feb-2021
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Hi Allie Thanks so mich for your review it was a fun style to try and tis just came out of nowwhere I never know what ai will write until my first line and this is this this time
Cheers Chrisx
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Well I think you did a great job, Christine, you are so welcome.
Comment from Boogienights
I don't know how you write complicated poems like this. I read about the form it needed to be in and thought I was reading a foreign language! I think I need to take a class...ð??? Thanks for sharing this delightful poem.:)
reply by the author on 31-Jan-2021
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I don't know how you write complicated poems like this. I read about the form it needed to be in and thought I was reading a foreign language! I think I need to take a class...ð??? Thanks for sharing this delightful poem.:)
Comment Written 31-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 31-Jan-2021
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Hi Boogienights Thanks for your review and no it is nit complicated have a go you might surprise yourself They make me think Glad you liked it
Cheers Christine
Comment from royowen
When I create a new form nobody follows it, but everybody follows others, my confidence has taken a crash dive, how to prove unpopular without trying. But well done you've done a good job with this form, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 31-Jan-2021
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When I create a new form nobody follows it, but everybody follows others, my confidence has taken a crash dive, how to prove unpopular without trying. But well done you've done a good job with this form, blessings Roy
Comment Written 31-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 31-Jan-2021
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Oh Roy Don?t get down This was a club challenge from Jan I occasionally have a go
And this was on offer this week
But I do thank you for your comments Many Cheers Chris
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Most welcome, I?m OK Chris have
Comment from 4theloveoftrees
I am not knowledgeable on the form, but this is a wonderful poem about a dream of acquiring wings and flying above the Earth taking in all the beauty below. I really enjoyed this, thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 31-Jan-2021
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I am not knowledgeable on the form, but this is a wonderful poem about a dream of acquiring wings and flying above the Earth taking in all the beauty below. I really enjoyed this, thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 31-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 31-Jan-2021
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Hi 4theloveoftrees Thanks for reading my poem and what a dream it would be fun to fly and glad you enjoyed this
Cheers Christine
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
This poem speaks that without thinking much we must start what we wish to do and through practice the routes of working will be discovered and perfection would come and to completed the job with a success unexpected; well said, well done; thanks for sharing this. ALCREATOR
reply by the author on 01-Feb-2021
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This poem speaks that without thinking much we must start what we wish to do and through practice the routes of working will be discovered and perfection would come and to completed the job with a success unexpected; well said, well done; thanks for sharing this. ALCREATOR
Comment Written 31-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 01-Feb-2021
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Hi ALCREATOR Thank you for your review and I enjoyed the challenge keeps the mind active
Cheers Chris
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written Pantygynt poem about dreams that take us to places on wings where we can go without traveling at a costy rate.
reply by the author on 01-Feb-2021
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A very well-written Pantygynt poem about dreams that take us to places on wings where we can go without traveling at a costy rate.
Comment Written 31-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 01-Feb-2021
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Hi Sandra Thanks for reviewing and it would be a lot cheaper with wings Ha ha
cheers Chris
Comment from LisaMay
You did a great job with this and have my admiration for giving it a go and writing such a beautifully flowing and interesting poem. I have a brain seizure whenever I see the word 'iambic' because working out stresses does my head in. I think I must speak differently to other poets who seem to cope with strange (to me) stress schemes easily.
reply by the author on 31-Jan-2021
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You did a great job with this and have my admiration for giving it a go and writing such a beautifully flowing and interesting poem. I have a brain seizure whenever I see the word 'iambic' because working out stresses does my head in. I think I must speak differently to other poets who seem to cope with strange (to me) stress schemes easily.
Comment Written 31-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 31-Jan-2021
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Thanks Lisa Yes me too I really have no idea about stresses or not stresses I just work out syllables and go with that if it sounds alright and meets my syllable count on my fingers then I do that word
anyway I enjoyed this style but really dont know if it is Iambic meter or not, no doubt the gurus of poetry here will enlighten me
I write without BS attached anyway. Ha ha
Cheers Uneducated Chris ha ha
